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| Reviewer: Grace has Victory | Date: 2006-04-13 |
| Reviewid: 141884 | Chapter: 0 |
| This one is heartbreaking. He looks so happy - free at last from his horrible family? - and he reminds me a little of my own son. It's dreadful to remember what's going to happen to him. Fortunately, it's clear from the impish lights on your picture that this Sirius hasn't a clue about his future! |
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| Reviewer: Sofia | Date: 2004-11-10 |
| Reviewid: 104142 | Chapter: 0 |
it seems that he would be a little more handsome and less draco like. (i also picture him with perfect teeth) :D
chao
sofia |
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| Reviewer: misty | Date: 2004-10-26 |
| Reviewid: 102477 | Chapter: 0 |
| If I were a Hogwarts professor, and he shot me that grin. . . I would probably run and hide under my bed! Its all there in his face; mischief, excitement, even curiosity! You can just tell he's going to be trouble. |
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| Reviewer: merry101 | Date: 2004-10-07 |
| Reviewid: 100690 | Chapter: 0 |
umm........his hair looks a little greasy- and his teeth....but I like the art!
~merry |
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| Reviewer: dzennka | Date: 2004-09-22 |
| Reviewid: 99009 | Chapter: 0 |
I can't remember if I've reviewed this one before or not? I'm sure I thought about it...
Anyway, I like how his teeth are just a touch too big and his hair isn't so great. That's very 11. Eleven-year-olds are supposed to be awkward, and you've captured that. I can also see by the expression on his face that he's feeling mischevious. I think he's trying to make an expression that has always come off as a cherubic smile in the past, but he's just starting to outgrow "cherubic" and instead it looks like he's scheming. Great work - I hardly ever think up back-stories when I see artwork! |
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| Reviewer: Avada Kedavra | Date: 2004-08-12 |
| Reviewid: 96937 | Chapter: 0 |
oh my god, no offense but Sirius is supposed to be good looking!! i mean, whoa! but it's just my opinion, and it doesn't really matter in the long run. i think, mainly, it's the teeth, other then that it's okay!
Avada Kedavra |
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| Reviewer: ShardWing | Date: 2004-08-09 |
| Reviewid: 96533 | Chapter: 0 |
The hair and body is cool, but he looks like dracula with his teeth.
Other than that though, I could NEVER hope to draw this well
Nice job.
~ShardWing |
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| Reviewer: Frankie Beeblebrox | Date: 2004-08-09 |
| Reviewid: 96485 | Chapter: 0 |
| I love the cheeky grin you've given him in this portrait. It really tells a lot about his character. It's also interesting how much his hair dominates the picture, though I can't tell if that's a deliberate choice or if it's the way the picture scanned. For some reason his teeth seem slightly wonky, but that's just me trying to find something to nitpick. :-) Very, very nicely done. |
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| Reviewer: ivy & Gracie | Date: 2004-08-09 |
| Reviewid: 96408 | Chapter: 0 |
| Now, we can't draw for beans, but we *really* can't draw someone in 3/4 profile. Good heavens, keep this little troublemaker away from our daughters; everything about him says "mischief!" The teeth are so very, very eleven-year-old; that awkward time of life when nothing seems to fit together on the body--He really does look like a boy that's teetering on the brink of adolescence. Lovely! |
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| Reviewer: Katie | Date: 2004-08-08 |
| Reviewid: 96334 | Chapter: 0 |
| he's cute but the teeth are kinda weird(although teeth are always very hard to do) other than that it's excellent. but kids this age do have awkward teeth- i know i did and i HATED it. he's just at an awkward age |
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| Reviewer: Katie | Date: 2004-08-08 |
| Reviewid: 96333 | Chapter: 0 |
| he's cute but the teeth are kinda weird(although teeth are always very hard to do) other than that it's excellent |
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| Reviewer: mdelaur | Date: 2004-08-08 |
| Reviewid: 96276 | Chapter: 0 |
| Okay, so I don't think that my mini-post gives him justice. You captured his mischievious side perfectly. He looks like he has just put a thumbtack on the teacher's chair. Well, of course his trick would have to be charmed... so, the thumbtack is invisible and also impossible to remove for 8 hours. Oh, and it also makes the person fart a lot. Good enough trick for a first year Sirius? |
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| Reviewer: $~#Glowing * Toadstool#~$ | Date: 2004-08-07 |
| Reviewid: 96223 | Chapter: 0 |
| This is great! A lot of people are commenting about his teeth and that they look funny but I think they are perfect. Most kids around that age have crooked uneven teeth due to them just growing in. I have to agree though, try darker shading, your pictures will come out much better and more defined. Good job! :D |
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| Reviewer: Alexandra | Date: 2004-08-07 |
| Reviewid: 96188 | Chapter: 0 |
| I like his hair and eyes, but his mouth (particularly his teeth) are slightly off. I also wish that you used darker shading. Good job though! |
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