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| Reviewer: ali | Date: 2005-08-23 |
| Reviewid: 130745 | Chapter: 0 |
| WOW, yes, very very good. shes so pretty! i love it, she's simply amazing, you portrayed her very well here. her hand is a bit small though, but drawn very well. |
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| Reviewer: Sammy | Date: 2005-03-13 |
| Reviewid: 116455 | Chapter: 0 |
| I picture her almost like this...but in the picture i love how u did the strands of light that are cought in her hair...its very nice |
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| Reviewer: CheddarTrek | Date: 2005-03-12 |
| Reviewid: 116261 | Chapter: 0 |
| Ooh, excellent picture. It's not quite how I picture Lily, but this is amazingly well done. I especially like the way you've done her hair... perfect! |
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| Reviewer: dragongirl0213 | Date: 2005-03-11 |
| Reviewid: 116086 | Chapter: 0 |
| I like your drawing- especially the hair. It gives Lily a wild, untamed look! I think perhaps a littel work could be done to make her face more...proportionate? Either the left eye is too far to the left, or the nose needs to be centered a littel more, or the right eye needs to come down- there's something there that needs to be tweaked. However, I really feel like I can't be too picky as I could never draw a person so well. Again, good work overall. Just a little fine tuning is needed! |
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| Reviewer: Susan Lynn | Date: 2005-03-09 |
| Reviewid: 115983 | Chapter: 0 |
| I really like this portrait of Lily. Her hair flows naturally, and her face is very pretty and feminine. I like how she is holding a moon, and I wonder if she is thinking of Remus. My only suggestion would be to completely remove her forearm and hand. They seem rather disconnected and out of proportion. Otherwise, I really like your style. It reminds me of Marta's pieces, and that's definitely meant as a compliment. |
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