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| Reviewer: Gred and Feorge | Date: 2007-12-29 |
| Reviewid: 150227 | Chapter: 0 |
Ohhh Boy! Watch out Harry!!!
Really great! Looks like the way I picture Romidla. |
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| Reviewer: dweo | Date: 2006-01-31 |
| Reviewid: 139090 | Chapter: 0 |
Very nice, I can just see them entering the carriage laughing at Neville and Luna. The only problem I see is that Romilda's face is slightly skewed. (I'm not sure how to explain it.)But the rest is done very well.
Dweo |
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| Reviewer: Beaker | Date: 2005-12-13 |
| Reviewid: 137123 | Chapter: 0 |
Very nice composition! They certainly are acting like a group of high school girls (that's what they're called where I live). Romilda's friends look a little old, however. More like adults. Romilda's age is on target.
Thanks for reminding me of a scene that I really like! At least, I really like Harry's response to it. |
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| Reviewer: vinyl_records | Date: 2005-12-01 |
| Reviewid: 136648 | Chapter: 0 |
| Ooooooooooooh, very nice. Love the shading. Romilda's face looks to be a bit too round though... wasn't she supposed to have sharp features? Either way I like this. =D |
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| Reviewer: Ylime | Date: 2005-12-01 |
| Reviewid: 136639 | Chapter: 0 |
nundu, I love it!
They've all got those charming welcoming smiles on their faces, just *slightly* simpery. Perfect! Romilda looks fantastic - nearly exactly how I imagined her! Having her two friends posed almost like henchmen really shows she's the leader of the group. :D I love the way the picture is sort of framed in the door - it looks so great that way, almost dramatic - the impact of the picture is really heightened by that.
And as always, the light and shadow and other technical stuff are beautifully done. :)
Such a brilliant picture, well done! *hugs* |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2005-12-01 |
| Reviewid: 136636 | Chapter: 0 |
| Harry's fan club! My, oh, my! You've done a really nice job with this because I can just see these giggling girls trying to get Harry to join them! Brilliantly done. |
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| Reviewer: bennedetto | Date: 2005-12-01 |
| Reviewid: 136634 | Chapter: 0 |
Hmm...good picture, but in the title, her name's spelled wrong, and the curly-haired one to Romilda's right looks like a dude...who is...um, evil. Or something. And Romilda doesn't exactly look sixteen.
But all the same, good picture! |
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| Reviewer: corvidae | Date: 2005-12-01 |
| Reviewid: 136632 | Chapter: 0 |
| good, but they look like a group of thirty somethings. did you look at a reference picture? i would suggest doing it more from your own image of them in your head and you'd be surprised how good it'll turn out. great shading, i love the eyes. *-* |
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