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Review(s): 17
| Reviewer: charredtwilight | Date: 2005-01-09 |
| Reviewid: 110308 | Chapter: 0 |
| This is really cute! I especially like the Ginny at the top laying on the pillow--you did a really good job on that one. The expressions are all really funny. The poem adds a lot to the picture, too. |
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| Reviewer: Sabriel | Date: 2004-06-28 |
| Reviewid: 89188 | Chapter: 0 |
| Awww. This is really cute. I love Gin's slippers!!! I like to believe that she didn't send this Valentine, aand that she was the unlikely victim of the twins pranks, but whatever . *sighs* katie: I think, but am not a hundred percent sure, that the crossing-outs are deliberate. There are a few minor mistakes with the poem (unless you have a different copy than mine, and I am really, really sorry.) I recognized one mistake and went to check my book. Hem hem. The third line should have gone as follows: "I wish he was mine, he's really divine," and instead of defeated it should be conquered. If this was meant to be one of Ginny's rough drafts, then I'm really sorry sgain. This is a really cute and funny drawing!! |
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| Reviewer: Miriamele | Date: 2003-08-30 |
| Reviewid: 49467 | Chapter: 0 |
| I think that u r really good at this. Keep it up! It is really funny pics. Like this one very much. |
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| Reviewer: katie | Date: 2003-08-20 |
| Reviewid: 47951 | Chapter: 0 |
| lot's of crossing out's but other wise like the drawing.It's actully His eye's are as gree ass a fresh pickled toad his har is as dark as a blackboard, i wish he was mine he's really divine thr hero who conquered the dark lord |
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| Reviewer: Rowenna | Date: 2003-03-12 |
| Reviewid: 23696 | Chapter: 0 |
| i love it, but the final poem isn't correct, it should be "conquered" not defeated but me likey! |
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| Reviewer: Marie Arouet | Date: 2002-11-24 |
| Reviewid: 9979 | Chapter: 0 |
| Aww, I love this! The scribblings across the page really convey her feelings for Harry! (I like the slippers too) :) |
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| Reviewer: Karrie | Date: 2002-09-20 |
| Reviewid: 4367 | Chapter: 0 |
Adorable! This art is really well-drawn, and I like how you show Ginny writing the poem. Keep it up!
Love,
Karrie. |
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