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Review(s): 28
| Reviewer: Sabriel | Date: 2004-06-28 |
| Reviewid: 89176 | Chapter: 0 |
| Good... A little too cartoony for my taste. To whoever said that they couldn't tell the difference between Ginny and Hermione, Ginny is on the left, you can tell from a few freckles, but other than that, they look very similar. Hermione's hair looks waaay too perfect. Maybe you picture Hermione's hair straighter than the film versions- I do too, but to make it actually bushy, you could try; some out of place hairs; snot making both side so symetrical; and just mre hair that go a little more horizontally than these do. But Harry's robes are AWESOME and ROn's adorable!! :-D But Harry's hair is supposed to be messy- he should have hair sticking up in back and such. Umm... I don't know why he has a Nimbus 2002, he has a Nimbus 2000 and then a Firebolt, right? Maybe it's from a fanfic I haven't read before. Oh-do your names have anything to do with Terry Prattchett's character Granny Weatherwax? |
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| Reviewer: Sal | Date: 2004-06-05 |
| Reviewid: 86026 | Chapter: 0 |
| rrrrrrrrrr. well ginny is wonderful and ron is cute, but hermione's hair is wrong! its straight and not thick and... well thats it. sorry i dont want to sound mean, its really great besides that! |
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| Reviewer: Sirius Black | Date: 2003-10-17 |
| Reviewid: 56809 | Chapter: 0 |
Ummmm me friend, Remus, says u can't tell d diferens 'tween Ginny, and Herm.! And that doesn't look like Harry! He also says that the broom iz 2 SMAll! Remus says that it should be bit taller than him, and that goes up 2 hiz WAIST! NOT GOOD!
~Sirius Black |
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| Reviewer: Sirius Black | Date: 2003-09-09 |
| Reviewid: 51448 | Chapter: 0 |
Good GOD! Good, but too cartoony! Plus, doesn't he have a FIREBOLT?
Sirius Black |
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| Reviewer: richard | Date: 2003-07-21 |
| Reviewid: 43116 | Chapter: 0 |
hello, i live in brazil and i not speek english very weel, you speek about Harry Potter ande the Orden of Phoenix, because in brazil isn't lanced.
Tank you |
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| Reviewer: erm...forgot my name...i'll remember....later.... | Date: 2003-06-30 |
| Reviewid: 39045 | Chapter: 0 |
| how cute! i am not a fan of anime put it is still cute! |
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| Reviewer: rachel | Date: 2003-04-16 |
| Reviewid: 28170 | Chapter: 0 |
i really like this. its so cute (i hope that this is the angle u r going 4 cuz thats what most people seem 2 think)anime rox! and for some dstrange reason i like harrys shoes ::pause:: ya, ok. good job
~Rachel |
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| Reviewer: Sami | Date: 2003-01-12 |
| Reviewid: 16003 | Chapter: 0 |
CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*breathes*CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok, i think you go t the point! |
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| Reviewer: Jules | Date: 2003-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 15884 | Chapter: 0 |
Aww, I see you like anime, yes? :D
It's a damn cute picture, well done!! :) Keep up with the drawing!
Luv Jules. xxx |
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| Reviewer: Liralen | Date: 2003-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 15750 | Chapter: 0 |
| How cute! I especially love Ron and his freckles, and Ginny is lovely as well. Also, nice detail on the broom, and the clasp on Harry's Quidditch robes. Wonderful work so far - keep on drawing! |
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| Reviewer: Some random guy | Date: 2003-01-08 |
| Reviewid: 15575 | Chapter: 0 |
Ummm...nope. Not really. The expression of joy on their face fits, and ginny is quite well done, but Harry's head is a bit...off, and some of the angles in his boyd are skewed from an artistic standpoint ( I am assuming your proportions are manga styling). Hermione is too cute, with too dark straight hair and too pretty a heart shaped face. And Ron looks like a really little kid. Crazily little. Younger than Ginny by a lot, neverming Harry.
I am sorry if this comes across as overly critical, but I hope you will at least consider my comments. Your basic tone is correct, and your image of ginny is excellent, but elsewhere some notable flaws keep what could have been an amazing drawing from perfection. Keep trying though, its clear you have the ability to do better. |
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