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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: Anonymous | Date: 2004-08-20 |
| Reviewid: 98093 | Chapter: 0 |
| His eyes are extremely expressive, very wonderful, a little sadness, much fatigue, a rather forlorn feeling, but he seems to have very feminine features... |
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| Reviewer: Madeline | Date: 2004-05-01 |
| Reviewid: 80834 | Chapter: 0 |
The detail in the features is amazing. His eyes are very expressive and his mouth is perfect. I love how his eyes are shaded by hair but still visible. His facial expression is remarkably good.
Madeline |
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| Reviewer: piratelover | Date: 2004-03-28 |
| Reviewid: 76038 | Chapter: 0 |
| Somehow I like it, I don't really know why. But he does look a bit girlish- if a couple things were changed it would be better. |
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| Reviewer: wendelin | Date: 2004-03-15 |
| Reviewid: 74760 | Chapter: 0 |
| it's a girl! sorry... but maybe you should try changing the hairstyle and the mouth/chin area to give him a squarer jaw and make the hair a bit... boyish.. |
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| Reviewer: Manzabar | Date: 2003-07-10 |
| Reviewid: 41212 | Chapter: 0 |
| I agree with Durayan & Liralen that you did a great job capturing Remus's emotions with the eyes, but I also have to agree with Hannah in that the face looks rather feminine. I think the lips in the image come off as pouty-looking. I know this is a young Remus, but perhaps some wrinkle lines around the mouth or making the lips a bit thinner would help. I'm not entirely sure about that, but then I avoid sketching at this level of realism specifically so I don't have to worry about this kind of thing. :) |
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| Reviewer: Hannah | Date: 2003-02-01 |
| Reviewid: 18649 | Chapter: 0 |
| I like it a lot...but to me it looks like a woman. It might just be me...picky, picky, me. |
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| Reviewer: Moldy Muffin | Date: 2003-01-22 |
| Reviewid: 17233 | Chapter: 0 |
| It's okay, but it doesn't look much like Remus... to me, anyways. It's not how I imagined him. |
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| Reviewer: Liralen | Date: 2003-01-22 |
| Reviewid: 17227 | Chapter: 0 |
Oh, he looks so sad! Poor Remus...
Wonderful job capturing all that emotion!
It's hard to do, but you've done it so well.
Liralen |
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| Reviewer: Durayan | Date: 2003-01-21 |
| Reviewid: 17194 | Chapter: 0 |
| I really like the sad, miserable expression in his eyes. And that his hair is long enough to hang in his eyes, too! Very nice! |
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