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Review(s): 12
| Reviewer: Gufa | Date: 2004-06-06 |
| Reviewid: 86101 | Chapter: 0 |
I think youre very talented...this is very good. Hm, I think that Sirius's expression is a little off though, but that's the only thing I can "criticize". In my opinion, Lily's hair should be darker, but of course that's only the way I see her! I like James especially. Good work! |
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| Reviewer: Megan | Date: 2004-05-18 |
| Reviewid: 83248 | Chapter: 0 |
| Lily is so pretty and James is hot! Sirius looks like he's asleep standing up, though. |
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| Reviewer: sasha | Date: 2003-08-03 |
| Reviewid: 45164 | Chapter: 0 |
| I think that it is VERY nice, but i think that sirius's hair should be a little shorter, and james should look a little less like harry,, great drawing tho! |
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| Reviewer: sasha | Date: 2003-08-03 |
| Reviewid: 45162 | Chapter: 0 |
| I think that it is VERY nice, but i think that sirius's hair should be a little shorter, and james should look a little less like harry,, great drawing tho! |
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| Reviewer: kelly | Date: 2003-08-02 |
| Reviewid: 45067 | Chapter: 0 |
| WOW that is amazing!! looks exactly like i'd imagined James, Lily and Sirius. Snifff i miss snuffles....... |
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| Reviewer: googligoo | Date: 2003-07-01 |
| Reviewid: 39518 | Chapter: 0 |
that's really good! one problem though, you should make james more of a git. i really hate him.
googligoo`.^ |
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| Reviewer: ChelseaWeasley | Date: 2003-07-01 |
| Reviewid: 39470 | Chapter: 0 |
| aw, stupendous! i love it. james was so arrogant in that section, lily deserves to be mad at him. ;p |
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| Reviewer: majiklmoon | Date: 2003-07-01 |
| Reviewid: 39234 | Chapter: 0 |
| I like it....I don't know why, but i've always pictured Lily with curly red hair - but your take on her is dead on! |
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