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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 33

Reviewer: kiraDate: 2005-10-10
Reviewid: 134102Chapter: 0
hahaha. i like the title. I wish that would happen, hell, then sirius would be back and we could all dream about him getting his girl like remus did! dang i wish.

Reviewer: Grace (Laurel)Date: 2005-07-28
Reviewid: 128053Chapter: 0
I LOVE IT! Thank you, thank you for (unknowingly) agreeing with me. Sirius WILL come back. And this is absolutely excellent. Keep it up!

Reviewer: MagicDustDate: 2005-06-30
Reviewid: 125718Chapter: 0
This is really excellent

Reviewer: I have no name...Date: 2005-05-11
Reviewid: 121915Chapter: 0
This is a good picture, keep it up!

Reviewer: Solarius ScorchDate: 2005-04-07
Reviewid: 118977Chapter: 0
I really like that. I think You should draw more scenes, not only faces.

Reviewer: Sana JonDate: 2005-02-22
Reviewid: 114664Chapter: 0
Ooh! I love it so much! Awesome!

Reviewer: X-LydiaDate: 2004-09-30
Reviewid: 99950Chapter: 0
aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.................... *snif*

Reviewer: Hitchhiker's Guide to the GalaxyDate: 2004-06-25
Reviewid: 88874Chapter: 0
YAY! PADFOOT RETURNS! You made the archway/veil perfect! Even if Sirius doesn't come back (which I really hope he does!!!!!) this image of him lurking just beyond reach, half-visible, seems to reflect Harry's feeling that if he just pulled back the veil...
Great job. The force is with you.

Reviewer: UnnamedDate: 2004-04-14
Reviewid: 78772Chapter: 0
It's a moving picture, but I don't agree with the theory. Death is death. Somehow that's reassuring to me. If that DOES happen I'll really have to adjust to it...

Reviewer: P. D. YerfDate: 2004-04-12
Reviewid: 78321Chapter: 0
Ooooooooh! I LOVE it! YAY! Padfoot returns!!! WOOT WOOT!

Reviewer: LGJadeDate: 2004-04-11
Reviewid: 78211Chapter: 0
HUZZAH!!! We're not the only ones who want to bring him back!!! ^_^

Reviewer: LaurenDate: 2004-04-11
Reviewid: 78202Chapter: 0
now i'm all sad, but great picture. i like the surrouding walls

Reviewer: Lady EowynDate: 2004-02-06
Reviewid: 69757Chapter: 0
*Tear*! I love this! You could right a fic about it! Or... with your permission could I???????????

Reviewer: Paige Knorr (The Muggle Hermione)Date: 2003-09-11
Reviewid: 51791Chapter: 0
Dear Gryffinjack,
Spooky. You have given the Veil of Death (or so I like to call it) that perfect spookiness... Perfect. And the aged look is wonderful. Wouldn't it be great if this happened? Even if he had to stay in dog form. Who knows, J.K.Rowling may surprise us...

Paige (The Muggle Hermione)

Reviewer: Pickle PrincessDate: 2003-08-04
Reviewid: 45409Chapter: 0
Hah, I'm back!

<i>I'd just like her to remember something, whenever she gets the urge to kill off another character or thinks twice about bringing Sirius back; Arthur Conan Doyle TRIED to kill off Sherlock Holmes. </i>

LMAO so true. But, the way he brought it back around was rather lame. I really think that if JKR brings Sirius back, at this point it will just make things worse. :)

-pickle, who is really going to shut up now. lol

Reviewer: xonyDate: 2003-07-24
Reviewid: 43572Chapter: 0
It's a nice dream...

Reviewer: ChristinaDate: 2003-07-23
Reviewid: 43552Chapter: 0
Hey, JKR brought us Sirius in the first place, so you shouldn't really be complaining...

Amazing picture; I love the title. Nice job.

Reviewer: lindauDate: 2003-07-23
Reviewid: 43527Chapter: 0
i cant believe that JKR killed Sirius!!!! he is my favorite character in the book! I'm still in denial. i shouldent get my hopes up that he'll be alive somehow. i just wonder what is that purpose of that archway. is it used to get rid of criminals? anyway grat pic. I like how you made the archway look ancient.

Reviewer: *Ginny Starre*Date: 2003-07-23
Reviewid: 43452Chapter: 0
*starts bawling*

Reviewer: JennDate: 2003-07-22
Reviewid: 43268Chapter: 0
Oh I wish this would happen (something tells me it won't, but we can all dream right?)

To comment on the picture directly, great job!! You can really tell the arch is old and crumbly. Very nice!

Reviewer: The Good Doctor MonacoDate: 2003-07-20
Reviewid: 43004Chapter: 0
Great job, Gryff!

Must compliment the attention to detail-- you can tell the stone of the arch is really old and crumbling.

Also, the coloring captures the atmosphere of that room excellently.

Again, good work! :-)

~Dr. Monaco~

Reviewer: googligooDate: 2003-07-20
Reviewid: 42944Chapter: 0
ouch!!! IM GONNA KILL JOJO FOR KILLING OFF SIRIUS[who was going to be my future husband]!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you know, i heard this story when an author tried to kill off his main character from the famous series he wrote, riots broke up among the streets from the fans so then the author let his character live. hmmm.... maybe we could riot on the streets and change jkr's mind......

btw, sorry for my babbling, but nice pic, but bad coloring.

googligoo~.^
still mourning for sirius

Reviewer: PyroDate: 2003-07-20
Reviewid: 42935Chapter: 0
Ever since I read Order of the Phoenix I've been furious with JKR. I'd just like her to remember something, whenever she gets the urge to kill off another character or thinks twice about bringing Sirius back; Arthur Conan Doyle TRIED to kill off Sherlock Holmes. Ah, hope, denial and chocolate can help with ANYTHING.

Reviewer: MarieDate: 2003-07-19
Reviewid: 42911Chapter: 0
Ahhh!! If only...

Reviewer: MarieDate: 2003-07-19
Reviewid: 42910Chapter: 0
Ahhh!! If only...

Reviewer: LauritaDate: 2003-07-19
Reviewid: 42881Chapter: 0
Great job Gryff. I love the colors and the image. He's not gone, merely out of sight.

Reviewer: LunaDate: 2003-07-18
Reviewid: 42717Chapter: 0
I also like that there is light on the other side. And I like the feeling that the dog is sort of looking around the corner. I'm very fond of his red tong! That "makes" the picture.

I would of course love if this was true. But even if Sirius will not come back to normal life, I have a feeling that we have not heard the last from him...

Reviewer: ivy and GracieDate: 2003-07-18
Reviewid: 42616Chapter: 0
We can dream, my friend, but trust me - it will not happen. Were we the only ones in fandom who were so keyed up for a death in OotP that Sirius's death barely registered with us?? It was like, he fell through the veil and *&^WHAM@#$BAM(*&FIGHTSCENE@#$% **p.s. Sirius is unaccounted for ***&^%MAJORCHAOS&^%* _ Uh... did someone die here? Oh well... we miss him, truly we do, but are Very Disappointed in J.K. for the way she handled it all. Realize this is more of a canon gripe than an art critique, but we simply couldn't resist. We like your art with the sad sort of admiration that sighs....If Only!
R.I.P. Padfoot **resentful glare in JK Rowling's direction** ivy and Gracie

Reviewer: MenyaDate: 2003-07-18
Reviewid: 42578Chapter: 0
I like the attention to detail -- the stones are chipped and the veil is tattered, just like the arch is described in the book. I also like how you have light coming from behind the veil. A neat idea to have Padfoot emerging instead of Sirius. Good job.

Reviewer: ImpDate: 2003-07-18
Reviewid: 42568Chapter: 0
great pic :D I totally love it...but highly doubt it will actually happen :(

~cheers

Reviewer: BorealisDate: 2003-07-18
Reviewid: 42559Chapter: 0
THIS IS SOOOOOOO GREAT!!! He is finally done playing hide-and-seek!!! He is BACK!!!!!!!!!! I doubt he'll come back (though hopes are still up), however I was in denial (still am too). You should honestly see my room, you could say I'm a BIT obsessed..... ok ok, I'm EXETREMELY obsessed with him. Well, just wanted to say, great pic!!! Colors, the dimesions, and most of all............... SIRIUS!!!! :) Can I make a suggestion?? Well, could you write more stories on Sirius in them??? Well it was only a suggestion :) .

Borealis

Reviewer: CharleneDate: 2003-07-18
Reviewid: 42527Chapter: 0
This is wonderful. The atmosphere is perfect, and you depicted that all-mysterious veil very well. The picture fills me with hope- and yet- I think it is unlikely.

Reviewer: Pickle PrincessDate: 2003-07-18
Reviewid: 42526Chapter: 0
YES! HE'S BACK! ::falls over:: HE WAS NEVER DEAD!

sorry, I am still in denial. he's GOTTA come back! I mean, he didn't even die right. He fell through a curtain. ::growls:: lol

Oh, and this is a very nice piece of artwork, by the way. I like the fact that you had Padfoot coming out of the curtain instead of Sirius as a human. And I am also jealous of your ability to draw stairs. ::pouts:: I cannot get it right!

x0x0
Pickle

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