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Review(s): 111

Reviewer: regaldeathDate: 2006-05-10
Reviewid: 142722Chapter: 0
wow, wonderful, love herm's face, amazingly done :D, you should looking at and see if it interests you.

Reviewer: XedraDate: 2005-08-31
Reviewid: 131390Chapter: 0
Love Hermoine's hair and her expression!

Reviewer: KristinaDate: 2005-08-10
Reviewid: 129481Chapter: 0
I like how you drew hermione's face though I have never read the fic. Also I like how you made them the focus and left the background simple. Keep drawing!

Reviewer: LibbyDate: 2005-04-19
Reviewid: 120062Chapter: 0
Wow! I love this one.

Reviewer: plinkoDate: 2005-01-18
Reviewid: 111284Chapter: 0
this is my favorite one!! (along w/ the mistletoe one) MORE.PLEEZ!!

Reviewer: lucyferDate: 2005-01-11
Reviewid: 110548Chapter: 0
wow oh wow oh wow.......hermione's facial expression is just amazingly real!! look at that little smiles!!
this is so fab!

Reviewer: Zee ClineDate: 2004-12-30
Reviewid: 109238Chapter: 0
Wow!! This one is great--I am very impressed with your artwork. You should definitely pursue a career as an artist of some type--you have a lot to offer and I love your work.

Reviewer: HannahDate: 2004-11-28
Reviewid: 106227Chapter: 0
wow! Listen, I went and looked at all of your scanned in art and out of them all, this was THE ONE.....hermione's emotions are perfectly captured and Hermione looks identical to Emma Watson from the movies!!!! Good dancing form which is hard to do.

Reviewer: EclectusDate: 2004-11-07
Reviewid: 103731Chapter: 0
I know I've commented this pic before but ugh I just can't stop!
I swear I will never tire of looking at this painting. Sveltsye - wow, I mean
you're water color skills are just - wow - Hermione is just amazing in
so many ways - she shading on her hair, face and arms: gorgeous. Her
expression: unreplicable(ok that't not a word...oh well)
I just saw you're compilation of the JKR letter - and wow - it's AMAZING!
I'm not a frequent on the forums and I'm not even a SQ member (AAH!) but an SQ
at heart - my schedule's just too busy - so I didn't know about the letter till
today - oh well, too late:( I always wanted to write to JKR and tell her how
Harry Potter kept me sane when my brother was a toddler - HP stories and threats
that he was acting Dudley'ish kept him listening to me - too bad he's 7 now:(
<3 Eclectus

Reviewer: BernadeteDate: 2004-08-02
Reviewid: 95299Chapter: 0
This art is amazing! Congratulations! I really loved it!

Reviewer: RenataDate: 2004-08-01
Reviewid: 95117Chapter: 0
This is VERY good...Did you use watercolors?? If you did, I GREATLY admire you! With watercolor, I didn't have prayer of getting past flower-dots in sixth grade art. My only gripe at first with this was that Hermione looked very young, but then, I thought, she's not exactly a 50 year old at Hogwarts, and can't be more than 24-25 years old. You did amazing detail, and even if you didn't use watercolors, this is still great! (p.s. if it's not watercolor, is it chalk? didn't think so...)

Reviewer: cherryblossom08Date: 2004-07-24
Reviewid: 93904Chapter: 0
This drawing actually looks real! Great job!

Reviewer: Lady EilonwyDate: 2004-07-24
Reviewid: 93826Chapter: 0
omg... this is soooooooo cute... my friend tibs and i wer looking through your stuff and found this, we nearly screamed... this has got to be the most adorable ron and hermione i have ever seen... i love hermione's smile. it's like ron said something to her and she's trying not to blush really hard. she's looks almost embarrassed in an adorable way...

please please please do one like this for lily and james or ginny and harry...

~Lady Eilonwy aka bree

Reviewer: GinnyDate: 2004-07-22
Reviewid: 93680Chapter: 0
I love it! Very nice background. I love the way you captured Hermione's face - just like Emma Watson! Absolutely perfect.

Reviewer: MaeraDate: 2004-07-22
Reviewid: 93554Chapter: 0
OMG this is SOOOOOOO perfect! it looks like a photo or something! YOu are SOOOOO good at this!!!!!!!!!! LOVE ron's hair!!!

Reviewer: AshleyDate: 2004-07-16
Reviewid: 92494Chapter: 0
Wow! I think that this pic is your best! It's wonderful!

Reviewer: JenDate: 2004-07-14
Reviewid: 92289Chapter: 0
Awww, great work. :)

Reviewer: quafflequeenDate: 2004-07-13
Reviewid: 92230Chapter: 0
truly beautiful. the shy way hermione is looking down is *perfect*!

Reviewer: rotemDate: 2004-07-13
Reviewid: 92160Chapter: 0
wow! beatiful!
and your Hermione looks so much like Emma Watson!

Reviewer: biancaDate: 2004-07-13
Reviewid: 92152Chapter: 0
cute very very cute

Reviewer: Weasel KingDate: 2004-07-13
Reviewid: 92146Chapter: 0
Wow! i alway liked r/h. especially RONALD BABEH!!! Go dude!


Reviewer: Lauren ElizabethDate: 2004-07-12
Reviewid: 91889Chapter: 0
WICKED!!!! It's beautiful, sveltskye!!!:>
~Lauren Elizabeth

Reviewer: Lauren ElizabethDate: 2004-07-12
Reviewid: 91887Chapter: 0
WICKED!!!! It's beautiful, sveltskye!!!:>
~Lauren Elizabeth

Reviewer: SadieDate: 2004-07-04
Reviewid: 90533Chapter: 0
Oh my god, fantastically beautiful.

Reviewer: onlylonelyDate: 2004-06-18
Reviewid: 87680Chapter: 0
I love Bury the Hatchet.. *sniffs*

Hermione's so pretty! *whines* That's not fair! Why can't MY hair be like that? *pouts* And she looks so realistic.. it's almost like a photograph. I love how the background is artistically blurred.


Weren't they dancing with Ron shirtless because he was doing Tai Chi?

*suddenly starts begging sveltskye to do a shirtless Ron*

Reviewer: Silver PhoenixDate: 2004-06-16
Reviewid: 87409Chapter: 0
Wow. This is INCREDIBLE! When you said in your review that you'd painted a picture from Bury the Hatchet I got all excited, and when I saw this I was just in AWE. Hermione's expression is perfect, and I love your use of colours. Amazing work, it's like you took this scene right from my head and painted it ^_^


Reviewer: FrankieDate: 2004-05-18
Reviewid: 83348Chapter: 0
Can't believe I missed this! Fantastic pic for a fantastic fic. Hermione's expression is classic and the watercolors give a very dreamy quality to the picture. Lovely.

Reviewer: Ginny777Date: 2004-05-18
Reviewid: 83330Chapter: 0
I love this picture! They look so happy...:)

Reviewer: kikinkaDate: 2004-05-16
Reviewid: 82817Chapter: 0
wow! how beautiful! i especially like Hermione's expression and her hands :) you're really good :)

Reviewer: EndicottDate: 2004-05-15
Reviewid: 82786Chapter: 0
its really good great use of color

Reviewer: BarbDate: 2004-05-10
Reviewid: 82044Chapter: 0
All I have to say is wow... This is your best... It's even better than the last Fleur one with the frenchy beauty thingy. I mean, this almost looks like a photographed scene! It's just amazing!

Reviewer: SoraDate: 2004-05-10
Reviewid: 82023Chapter: 0
That is so awsome! Its incredible, and exactly how I'd imagine them.

Reviewer: ParanoidDate: 2004-05-08
Reviewid: 81754Chapter: 0
*Gasps in absolute amazement* When I first scrolled down, I thought it was an actual picture! I had to do a double-take for a second, then I realized it was a drawing. This is one of my FAVS! You're very talented, keep up the awesome work! Hermione's really pretty looking... Awww, how lovely.

Reviewer: ~*Guinevere~*Date: 2004-05-07
Reviewid: 81470Chapter: 0
Now THIS is something. Is this a painting? Well, it's very well drawn and they both look very realistic. Excellent work.

Reviewer: jessicaDate: 2004-04-30
Reviewid: 80771Chapter: 0
holy cow.. thats awsome! i love it!! *thumbs up*
:( i wish i could draw.sketch/colour/paint as well as you.. *sigh*

Reviewer: Ashley M.Date: 2004-04-30
Reviewid: 80714Chapter: 0
This has to be one of my favorite fanart's ever. I love how realistic Hermione is. Her expression is perfect. I wish i was half as artistic as you are! Keep the beautiful work coming!

Reviewer: LehaDate: 2004-04-29
Reviewid: 80675Chapter: 0
Fabulous! Only problem: Ron's hair seems a little too red, like it's a neon budweiser sign. Also, Hermoine seems so loose and Ron seems so stiff. Other than that: very good.

Reviewer: LauraTheEscapistDate: 2004-04-29
Reviewid: 80555Chapter: 0
SIGH. That is so good. I just wish the view rotated as if it were a moving picture in The Daily Prophet or on a Hogwarts wall. Man, would that be cool. :) heheh, I'm just living in a magical world here. Really though, I love it.

Reviewer: Godrics_HollowDate: 2004-04-28
Reviewid: 80494Chapter: 0
Dunno if i have commented here but just wanted to say. This pic led me to find this fanfic and read it. You did a lovely job. Who cares about Rons hair colour? I dont,its fine. The point is you got the moment right. Thats all it needs to represent. And those highlights? Theres no way i could do that, especially with a paintbrush!

Reviewer: JenDate: 2004-04-28
Reviewid: 80460Chapter: 0
I love it! Its so beautiful and very inspitational, I just want to pull out my watercolors and paint Ron and Hermione and other Harry Potter characters. Thanks for the inspiration I've been looking for all weekend.

Reviewer: kathleen c.Date: 2004-04-27
Reviewid: 80433Chapter: 0
wow! This is beautiful! Hermione's hair looks great!

Reviewer: DeidreDate: 2004-04-26
Reviewid: 80308Chapter: 0
Wow! This watercolor is GREAT!! I think that it is the best art that you have up here! Its so life like, but then it has a sence of surealism. Good job!

toodles yo~


Reviewer: CatDate: 2004-04-22
Reviewid: 79731Chapter: 0
>> Gasps <<

This is so f*cking beautiful! They look like real people that I could sit and watch. Listening to music pay as they spin around. She's laughing because of something he said in her ear. He is inwardly pleased that she enjoyed his joke. I could go on ranting about silly stuff that I can imagin are occuring at this moment.

It nearly brings tears to my eyes. It is just so beautiful. There is only one thing I would change and that would be Ron's hair. It's a bit too red. Maybe with more of an orange tint it would be more imaginable (spelling?). Other then that everything is perfect. Great job! Keep up the good work!


Reviewer: GinnyWDate: 2004-04-19
Reviewid: 79538Chapter: 0
WOW! this pics really good!

Reviewer: katieDate: 2004-04-19
Reviewid: 79478Chapter: 0
:gasps: stunning!

Reviewer: CassieDate: 2004-04-19
Reviewid: 79417Chapter: 0
By far my favorite. You captured the colors just right. Goodness, I can't explain the words I'm serching for. Wonderful, amazing, colorful, lovely, etc...

Reviewer: RizzDate: 2004-04-18
Reviewid: 79257Chapter: 0
HOLY CRAP> THATS AWESOME! IT'S THE CUTEST FREAKIN PICTURE I'VE EVER SEEN! TALENT! Like i said- you're best with water color. How are you with acrylic?

Reviewer: mreddy817Date: 2004-04-16
Reviewid: 79035Chapter: 0
wHOA! This is soooo good! It's great!

Reviewer: LindsayDate: 2004-04-15
Reviewid: 78949Chapter: 0
this is gorgeous- you did hermione very well, she actually looks a bit like emma watson, but anyway- u are sooo talented, i think this my favorite pic of yours.

Reviewer: HoneybeeDate: 2004-04-13
Reviewid: 78449Chapter: 0
I really like this picutre! I think the way you have Hermione with her eyes cast down but a BIG smile on her face is just perfect.

Reviewer: JackieDate: 2004-04-11
Reviewid: 78230Chapter: 0
How cute!!!!! :D

Reviewer: JKEDate: 2004-04-11
Reviewid: 78200Chapter: 0
ooh, cute!
very well done!
i luv it!

Reviewer: AnnieDate: 2004-04-10
Reviewid: 77959Chapter: 0
Bah, whatever. I never really cared about Charles anyway. I always hated in stories when a "wrong partner" is inserted just to get two people together, but silverpheonix is so amazing that he/she can pull anything off. You really should read the second fic, too.

Reviewer: ladymDate: 2004-04-10
Reviewid: 77933Chapter: 0
Have realized I sound stupid, as I have finished the fic. Poor Charles, hah! Evil Charles!!!!!!!!!!! That's all. I was just reading some of my old reviews...

Reviewer: LaurenDate: 2004-04-09
Reviewid: 77884Chapter: 0
this is my favourite of all your work. hermione's face if great, And i love the background, its beautiful

Reviewer: jinxDate: 2004-04-09
Reviewid: 77852Chapter: 0
i luv this sooo much. ah! it iz sooo cute

Reviewer: AmandaDate: 2004-04-08
Reviewid: 77734Chapter: 0
wow. this is a GREAT picture! i really like you CoS cover too!!

Reviewer: BecksDate: 2004-04-08
Reviewid: 77705Chapter: 0
AWWWWW! So pretty!

Reviewer: BeckyDate: 2004-04-07
Reviewid: 77638Chapter: 0
Ok, ok, so Becky is my REAL name, not Shane. (I only did that cuz I liked the name ;) Anywho: Ooh! I really like this pic. It's soooo realistic. (Tell me, wuz that spelled right?) Keep doing this kind of art, (u no realitistic) It's soo good!

Reviewer: DraeconinDate: 2004-04-07
Reviewid: 77635Chapter: 0
They do look like they belong together, don't they? :) Extremely good art, imo.

Reviewer: TanyaDate: 2004-04-01
Reviewid: 76734Chapter: 0
Wow, I love this fan looks so real...I imagened Ron a bit taller...but she's probably wearing high heals...anyway if I should grade'll be an A...



Reviewer: divDate: 2004-04-01
Reviewid: 76695Chapter: 0
ooh soo romantic. i love, i love. hermione looks really good..i want to see more of ron!!

lol i really like this one you did!!! good job - i think it's your best one.

Reviewer: Livia LianaDate: 2004-04-01
Reviewid: 76689Chapter: 0
This is just a lovely picture. I haven't read the fic it's based on, but it stands alone beautifully. The background, especially the lights, is exquisite and the level of detail in the faces and Hermione's arm is excellent. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: Kate LynnDate: 2004-03-31
Reviewid: 76632Chapter: 0
Oh, this is gorgeous! Hermione's face is so realistic and the expression just right. Radiant and yet a bit modest... the colors are great as well. This is one of my favorite works. Thanks for sharing it.

Kate Lynn

Reviewer: gettieDate: 2004-03-31
Reviewid: 76617Chapter: 0
That is so beautiful! Wow. *happy sigh*

Reviewer: christyDate: 2004-03-31
Reviewid: 76583Chapter: 0
holy god u are good! that is so so so so cool! i always think of water color is this run out watery nasty looking color but u made it look beautiful. Bravo!

Reviewer: ladymDate: 2004-03-31
Reviewid: 76554Chapter: 0
Aha! Ahahaha! Have read the dancing chapter, and am very excited! Great picture! Loving it loving it loving it! Poor Charles! He should be in the shadows look angry...
^__^ it looks even better now that I know that background story! Yay you!

Reviewer: ladymDate: 2004-03-31
Reviewid: 76523Chapter: 0
I think this is definitely one of your best pics here! Though there are some close rivals... Still, this makes TWO pictures of yours that have inspired me to go read the fics they came from. Of course, I'm only on about chapter five of it so far, but I'm workin on it! Did I mention how beautiful this is yet? THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! I love Hermione's face! I cannot believe how detailed and lifelike you made this. With WATERCOLORS. My watercolors are... scary. To say the least. I must admit that isn't how I pictured Hermione's face, but it is so detailed and beautiful and awesome, I completely forgive you one hundred times over! Then again, I just realized this could be older Hermione. Smart. Sorry.
Anyways, I'm sorry my reviews for your stuff is completely out of order and random and such. I think I reviewed like two of them shortly under random names. But then when you posted more I decided to reveal a more permanent name b/c you post fast and your work is great & I am planning on looking for your name for a long time! And so I honored you with several... interesting... reviews.

Reviewer: Cutie pieDate: 2004-03-30
Reviewid: 76480Chapter: 0
OOh ron looks cool... and hermione looks SOOO pretty

Reviewer: ddDate: 2004-03-30
Reviewid: 76411Chapter: 0
wow. you have a talent. hermione looks really happy.

Reviewer: ainsleyDate: 2004-03-30
Reviewid: 76382Chapter: 0

Reviewer: AshleyDate: 2004-03-30
Reviewid: 76369Chapter: 0
Wow! Nicely done! I love the colors. Great job! (:

Reviewer: BrytniDate: 2004-03-30
Reviewid: 76352Chapter: 0
I like this a lot! V. kool. Keep at it! *hobbles off to read mentioned fic*

Reviewer: youDate: 2004-03-30
Reviewid: 76349Chapter: 0
Hey take back everything i said earlier, im in a bad mood, ive seen some of your stuff and it is awsome, especially this, superb forgive me, i feel like i piece of crap.... but what it seems like to me is that you try really hard on some stuff, then on others you go as fast as possible, and some turn out really well and others dont, but this is really good, so are a couple of the others.

Reviewer: SehilaDate: 2004-03-29
Reviewid: 76300Chapter: 0
I LOVE THIS! That is my favorite chapter in Bury the Hatchet.

Reviewer: SamDate: 2004-03-29
Reviewid: 76290Chapter: 0
Looking over all your pics... i think this one is the best. I also am a great fan of Bury the Hatchet and Perfect World, so I suppose I'm a bit biased. :) Keep up the good work

Reviewer: GufaDate: 2004-03-11
Reviewid: 74046Chapter: 0
I like this a lot...the characters, the colors, the's very good indeed! I wish I could see Ron's face, but imagining it is fun, too...

Reviewer: JennaDate: 2004-03-10
Reviewid: 73933Chapter: 0
WOW thats all I can say is WOW

Reviewer: Oh! Wow!Date: 2004-03-10
Reviewid: 73925Chapter: 0
Wow! Incredible!

Reviewer: GinnyAuror00Date: 2004-03-10
Reviewid: 73919Chapter: 0
So sweet...I love Hermione's face!!!!!

Reviewer: AnnieDate: 2004-03-10
Reviewid: 73885Chapter: 0
Sorry, Eclectus! Hope I got it right this time. I noticed after that I had spelled it wrong but didn't want to give myself another review to fix it :)

Reviewer: EclectusDate: 2004-03-10
Reviewid: 73884Chapter: 0
wow 5x7 yet so much detail:)

um, you called me Eclarus - it's Eclectus, lol - it's the name of a parrot:)

Reviewer: Guess Who?Date: 2004-03-09
Reviewid: 73849Chapter: 0
Ooh, it's soooo cute!!!!!!!! You used such pretty colors and Hermione's hair is so detailed. I love it!!!!! Annie, it's PERFECT!!!!! And I think Ron's hair is fine.YAY!

Reviewer: y_shud_u_no?Date: 2004-03-09
Reviewid: 73847Chapter: 0
i love this pic! its the only good one, though. sorry to break the news to ya

Reviewer: Caitlyn B.Date: 2004-03-09
Reviewid: 73839Chapter: 0
That's soo cute!
I just think Ron's hair is a little too red

Reviewer: AnnieDate: 2004-03-09
Reviewid: 73832Chapter: 0
Thank you everyone for the lovely reviews! They make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside ;).

I suppose Ron's hair is a little too red too be realistic, but I kind of like it that way. I guess it's a stylistic thing. It kind of heightens the other colors, IMO. Of course, I didn't plan it that way ^_^. Maybe I'm just trying to make excuses, who knows ;)...

Elcarus, the pics only about 5x7 or so, so it's a bit small to hang, but I'm glad all you guys like it.

Reviewer: AnnieDate: 2004-03-09
Reviewid: 73831Chapter: 0
Oh my Gosh, that was YOU, Heather?!!!! *shock* ^_^

Reviewer: Heather Revealed! *GASP*Date: 2004-03-09
Reviewid: 73790Chapter: 0
OMIGOSH!!!! Annie you ROCK!! You definitely must've just got off the phone with me when you did THIS one, cause it's pure inspiratiopn!!! (j/k, don't you love my humility) No, Ron's hair is not too red it's the PERFECT shade---the shade his face turns when Hermione kisses him! Like that one part in OOTP that you accidently skipped over. :> YOU WISH!!! Once again, FAANTAAAASTIC, dahhling. Your best.
PS Did u do it from a photo? I only actually looked at it cause in the summary you said it was them dancing and I was so vain, I thought you did it from the photo shoot of us posing for the Yule Ball...YUCK... but this is much better... happiness!! YAY!

Reviewer: EclectusDate: 2004-03-09
Reviewid: 73782Chapter: 0
I just thought of one constructive criticism - I agree with Dina C. - I think Ron's hair seems a bit too red and artificial.
But, I can't stop staring at Hermione - her face and expression is just SO BEAUTIFUL!
I wish I could work magic with watercolors, I find them difficult to use.

Reviewer: EclectusDate: 2004-03-09
Reviewid: 73780Chapter: 0
I can see that you have amazing skill at watercolors. You colors are very rich and hte contrast between dark and light is excellent. I love the composition and the color scheme is so unique. It's perfect - you've captured the moment perfectly and you deserve to be commended.
This is beautiful. What size paper did you do it on? You should definately hang this up somewhere where people can see and admire it.

Reviewer: AreDate: 2004-03-09
Reviewid: 73766Chapter: 0
I love this picture. It is an excellent pic, for one, but another, I like how you've done it. You leave so much to the imagination and then yet so little! I can't describe it with words. Well done!

Reviewer: KewenDate: 2004-03-08
Reviewid: 73732Chapter: 0
*gasps* I LOVE this one! It's just... Perfect! They both look great, Hermione especially. Well done!

Reviewer: PBS JonesDate: 2004-03-08
Reviewid: 73703Chapter: 0
Very nice! Watercolor can be a difficult medium to work with, so a lot of artists shy away from it. I'm glad that you've mastered the wet stuff so you could treat us to this wonderful picture!
The dreamy "blobbiness" of the paint is perfect for this kind of scene.

Reviewer: US HP fanDate: 2004-03-08
Reviewid: 73659Chapter: 0
Excellent! You're very talented. I love this painting the best. You've captured an wonderful smile on Hermione.

Reviewer: TwilightSorceressDate: 2004-03-08
Reviewid: 73648Chapter: 0
Totally awesome! My only sadness is that I can't see Ron's face! I just love the look on Hermione's, though.

Reviewer: JaimeDate: 2004-03-08
Reviewid: 73622Chapter: 0
Wow, I love this picture, it's sooooo pretty!!! Keep up with the great drawing. *Wishes she was that good at that kind of art* :)

Reviewer: Godrics_HollowDate: 2004-03-08
Reviewid: 73616Chapter: 0
Oh yes i like that! It looks old and french. Good one! Keep it up!

Reviewer: RikkuDate: 2004-03-07
Reviewid: 73576Chapter: 0
Whoa, the facial expressions are like wow, and the colorings great!

Reviewer: JoannaDate: 2004-03-07
Reviewid: 73538Chapter: 0
Wow. This picture is AMAZING. It's really really beautiful. I can't believe you did this all with water colors! I'm really impressed. I love the expression on Hermione's face; she looks radiant and glowing with love and affection. So perfect. The only thing that's a little off is Ron's hair, but even then, it's just the color seems a little too red (if you know what I mean) and still, he looks fine, too red of hair or not.

I'm adding this to my list of favorite Hermione/Ron pictures! It's really beautiful and I applaud you on your talents.

Good job!

Reviewer: SteppsDate: 2004-03-07
Reviewid: 73536Chapter: 0
I had to review this one 'cos it's my favourite. Beautiful use of colour, and the detail on Hermione is awesome. I couldn't do that with watercolour if I tried my hardest! Great job.

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