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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 24

Reviewer: samDate: 2005-04-23
Reviewid: 120379Chapter: 1
curious, very curious

Reviewer: Reader2Date: 2005-03-16
Reviewid: 116723Chapter: 1
Fantastic MM fic. Thanks.

Reviewer: Emil. E. EtymDate: 2003-10-24
Reviewid: 57752Chapter: 1
This is great! You should write more of this story. I've always wondered how they made wands. You could write more! PLEase......

Reviewer: CinnamonDate: 2003-03-15
Reviewid: 24065Chapter: 1
Aaaaah! thats giving me goosebumps, it is!

Reviewer: StereoMDate: 2003-03-14
Reviewid: 23899Chapter: 1
That was really... wow. I liked that idea about the unicorns assembling once a year in the Forbidden Forest.

I really enjoy your writing style, I read "If At First You Don't Succeed" ages ago and loved it too.

:) StereoM

Reviewer: Night RainDate: 2003-02-21
Reviewid: 21367Chapter: 1
Very good job.

Reviewer: Aishuu ShadowweaverDate: 2003-01-01
Reviewid: 14760Chapter: 1
^_^ Another Ollivander fic! I'd about given up hope... It's pretty good... the ending could be a bit stronger (just reworded a bit) but overall, I love it. There's simply not enough Ollivander fans around!

Reviewer: KristinaDate: 2002-12-18
Reviewid: 13146Chapter: 1
you wrote this so well, noodles! (YDG)
(YOU DID GOOD)

Reviewer: PInkpantherDate: 2002-11-20
Reviewid: 9624Chapter: 1
Great job!

Reviewer: KristinaDate: 2002-11-18
Reviewid: 9442Chapter: 1
You did absolutely wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:-)
Please email me back noodles.

Reviewer: Kristina JonesDate: 2002-11-18
Reviewid: 9441Chapter: 1
I love your creativity!! You should become a writer.

Reviewer: JestanaDate: 2002-11-02
Reviewid: 7901Chapter: 1
Wow! I really liked this one! Especially the end. I'm willing to bet the phoenix is Fawkes. Excellent story.

Reviewer: EllenDate: 2002-11-02
Reviewid: 7897Chapter: 1
Very creative - I really liked the ending! Almost chilling.

Reviewer: Talking Purple RabbitsDate: 2002-11-01
Reviewid: 7844Chapter: 1
Whoah....Beautiful, perfect, thrilling...

Ron's wand...and Voldemort's, and Harry's... Wow.

Happy Hallowe'en, noodles!
~TPR

Reviewer: Jenni SnakeDate: 2002-10-30
Reviewid: 7624Chapter: 1
A fascinating Halloween story, congratulations, and thank you for inspiring me to go dust off the Ollivander story that has been fermenting in my mind... I especially liked your ending with the two Phoenix feathers, good subtle implications all round for that one!

Reviewer: Miss PinceDate: 2002-10-29
Reviewid: 7561Chapter: 1
Neat story. Good idea, nice style, well executed. I loved it. And the ending - just perfect.

Reviewer: annieDate: 2002-10-29
Reviewid: 7503Chapter: 1
Wow, neat! Very creative. And yes, I caught the referance to Danny boy!

Reviewer: CoKerryDate: 2002-10-28
Reviewid: 7454Chapter: 1
I like this story a lot! I think it's the first one I've ever read that's about Ollivanders and wand making. I'm glad that you decided to write about this usually ignored topic. Fawkes ROX....he certainly "gave" those two feathers up, almost as if he knew... ;)

Reviewer: Seldes KatneDate: 2002-10-28
Reviewid: 7451Chapter: 1
Excellent! I love stories that explore the backgrounds of minor characters. This was a clever reason for someone to be out on Halloween, plus it offered a tie-in to Harry's days at Hogwarts. Interesting that these two feathers were gathered at the end of Halloween night, given the importance of Halloween in later years to Harry's parents. Good explantion of how a man could actually gather unicorn hairs without being injured. Being able to do this one night a year would make it worth missing the Halloween banquet for me, too!

Reviewer: RugiDate: 2002-10-28
Reviewid: 7430Chapter: 1
Oh this is wonderful! I have always thought that Ollivander was one of the most fascinating minor characters Rowling created and you have expanded on him wonderfully. I got chills when he thought about the phoenix feathers he would make. And the idea of the unicorn reunion was beautiful.

I want to be a wandmaker now!

Reviewer: JulianeDate: 2002-10-28
Reviewid: 7426Chapter: 1
Ooooh, how lovely! I have a soft spot for the Ollivanders, and I love how you capture the 'family traits' - the fondness of Basil for hearing himself talk, the obsessive finiky-ness over materials...

The description of the gathering of the unicorn hair was wonderful. And the end....perfect.

Reviewer: oybolshoiDate: 2002-10-28
Reviewid: 7425Chapter: 1
What an interesting idea - I love the part with the phoenix feathers for Harry and Voldemort.

Reviewer: JennleeDate: 2002-10-28
Reviewid: 7417Chapter: 1
Ooh, I really liked this. So interesting. Love Algernon and all the history of the Ollivanders and wand making. Such a creative idea and very nicely executed.

Reviewer: BooklovrDate: 2002-10-28
Reviewid: 7398Chapter: 1
Oooooh. Very interesting. I don't usually like Ollivander-in-Hogwarts fics, but this one was very believable. Eek, Voldemort and Harry's wands! *Thumbs up*
~Booklovr

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