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Review(s): 9
| Reviewer: Wapu | Date: 2004-12-16 |
| Reviewid: 107941 | Chapter: 1 |
I think it's great how you were able to get inside Seamus's head. One doubt: Weren't Seamus and Lavender together, and Dean and Parvati? Just wondering.
Anyway, your story made me cry, I could really understand what he was feeling. |
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| Reviewer: mia | Date: 2004-06-29 |
| Reviewid: 89298 | Chapter: 1 |
| we need to know what hermione does! i cried during this it was so sad! but really great! |
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| Reviewer: Ciela Night | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88705 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow, this was an excellent story. I was almost in tears by the end, very powerful. Good job! |
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| Reviewer: Ellen | Date: 2003-12-25 |
| Reviewid: 64816 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh my gosh...that's scary...I cried at the end...oh my gosh...Poor Parvati and Seamus and Ron and everyone...that's horrible... |
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| Reviewer: kayjal | Date: 2002-12-26 |
| Reviewid: 14005 | Chapter: 1 |
wow!
i'm speechless!!
what a story i was crying all he way through it you really are good
kudos to you |
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| Reviewer: Emily | Date: 2002-11-23 |
| Reviewid: 9897 | Chapter: 1 |
You have taken two minor background characters and fleshedf them out so much. You have come up with a wonderful plotline and stayed to it. You have got the character's reactions down pat. You have made me cry.
This is a wonderful story... I love it. You did a wonderful job with it. |
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| Reviewer: sandy | Date: 2002-11-04 |
| Reviewid: 8091 | Chapter: 1 |
Wow, amazing fic. Very well written and very moving - what he did to her was so heartbreaking and the way that he percieved it made it all the more harrowing. This is not usually my first couple for Seamus (I'm more of a slasher with him) but I can suddenly see the appeal. Now all I need is some more good fics on them. Very well done.
Sandy |
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| Reviewer: Amelia Williams | Date: 2002-11-01 |
| Reviewid: 7782 | Chapter: 1 |
| Umm, I think the wrong fic was uploaded, this is the Neville/Lavender one again... |
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