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| Reviewer: Mariagoner | Date: 2004-08-11 |
| Reviewid: 96686 | Chapter: 1 |
| This piece really makes my heart burn. You can write a sympathetic Albus like no other. |
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| Reviewer: Catherine | Date: 2002-11-08 |
| Reviewid: 8437 | Chapter: 1 |
The most promising moment of this story is Dumbledore's weakness, and although that is passed over quickly, it is very effective.
I would like to see these three people involved in a happy moment some day.
The strength of your story here is mood.
Good work, Sweeney.
Catherine |
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