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Review(s): 22
| Reviewer: ange | Date: 2004-06-01 |
| Reviewid: 85567 | Chapter: 1 |
| lolz that was halerious poor ron lol and i wonder what fred was doing reading that even though his is going out with angelina |
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| Reviewer: kayjal | Date: 2003-03-31 |
| Reviewid: 25790 | Chapter: 1 |
veri funnny. hahaha and the way all the girls come in..and scold him for being a *sicko*
After a while of reading the book, Parvati walked up.
“Ron!”
“What?” Ron asked her.
“What are you reading?” Parvati asked.
“I’m reading a magazine,” Ron said, looking at her strangely.
Parvati walked away, angry.
hahhahah well done...
now could you write a story on when he tires to actually USE the boook to get hermione'z attention/// pretty pweeassee |
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| Reviewer: Ara Kane | Date: 2002-11-25 |
| Reviewid: 10083 | Chapter: 1 |
LOL Poor Ron -- his first-ever time to actually research on something out of his own free will, and so many things go wrong! I really liked this story, especially the part about Ron thinking about how "flirting" came after "fainting" in the dictionary! Haha!
Are you going to add another chapter? Will Hermione find Ron with the magazine? *nudgenudge* |
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| Reviewer: Kayla | Date: 2002-11-24 |
| Reviewid: 10032 | Chapter: 1 |
That was Great! Good Job! I agree with the rest of the reviewers, MORE CHAPTER!!!! *__* I doub you Hilarium Master! He He He
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| Reviewer: GinnyDragon54 | Date: 2002-11-23 |
| Reviewid: 9927 | Chapter: 1 |
| is this the whole story? It seems like it's unfinished somehow. Good start though. very funny! |
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| Reviewer: Joseph M. Cascio | Date: 2002-11-23 |
| Reviewid: 9900 | Chapter: 1 |
It's funny so far, but it needs more chapters, methinks... it's biting for something more to
be added, like putting the book to work with some magical, yet humorous consequences... good
effort, my friend.
Joe |
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| Reviewer: Lourdes | Date: 2002-11-23 |
| Reviewid: 9873 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ha, ha, ha, ha.... you naughty fanfic writer.... after playboy....oooops playwizard? Hello? Good humour.. Do continue to write... best wishes. |
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