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Review(s): 11
| Reviewer: Marcella | Date: 2005-04-19 |
| Reviewid: 119993 | Chapter: 1 |
| I LOVED IT!!!!Sounds like a very nice halloween,I especially like when Lily go over to curl up with James!! |
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| Reviewer: Seaspray | Date: 2005-03-06 |
| Reviewid: 115692 | Chapter: 1 |
| Nice! I liked the hints that Peter isn't quite as sweet-and-innocent as he appears. And the story itself was creepy... Happy writing! |
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| Reviewer: Gwen | Date: 2003-11-26 |
| Reviewid: 60894 | Chapter: 1 |
This is a really good fanfic idea! I write them myself, but I'd never have thought to have Nick telling ghost stories! The closest I've come to something like this is a re-enactment of a few of the more scarce ghosts from the books' deaths.
Even though I'm reading this the day before Thanksgiving, it has a certain tug at your logic and imagination... I really like the work!
This is my first story to read on the Sugar Quill, and I'm very glad I read it. You're amazing!
Hope you put up another chapter though! I'm 'dying' to see what the scarier ghost story is! |
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| Reviewer: Katie | Date: 2003-07-28 |
| Reviewid: 44323 | Chapter: 1 |
| oooooooo scary that's a cool story the end sounded like Lily and James were getten snuggly |
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| Reviewer: Vega Black | Date: 2003-07-21 |
| Reviewid: 43145 | Chapter: 1 |
| I loved that story!! really, i did! it would be super awsome if u would right anotha one, but its been almost a year since this one was pubished, so...i guess u wont be...any way...it was AWSOME!! |
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| Reviewer: Yolanda | Date: 2002-11-25 |
| Reviewid: 10089 | Chapter: 1 |
| I liked the prank that was played on Severus at the beginning. It was a good team effort for the Marauders. I also enjoyed the story that Nick told them. One thing I noticed when beta-reading this is that you get teenagers down very well. What teenager would want to sit through a story? Not even my pre-teen likes to sit still for a story. But, then they discovered that they liked the way Sir Nicholas told the story of the Inn. It was fun! |
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