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Review(s): 4
| Reviewer: Jazz | Date: 2002-12-02 |
| Reviewid: 10911 | Chapter: 1 |
| please write more, that was short. Not enoght to grasp. Yo know, it wasn;t much to talk about, but good all the same. |
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| Reviewer: Joseph M. Cascio | Date: 2002-12-02 |
| Reviewid: 10894 | Chapter: 1 |
| I don't imagine she'd be able to hold her bladder, much less her composure when confronting the man who tortured and murdered her parents. |
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| Reviewer: B. Nonymous | Date: 2002-12-02 |
| Reviewid: 10891 | Chapter: 1 |
Odd that Lorelei's last name is now Powell - identical to the man Snape was with. Was that a typo, or is there someting about Lorelei that we tender readers don't know yet?
Interesting premise though - a past victim meeting the reformed criminal. This could be a good series, done properly. |
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