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Reviews for: The Grey Story
Review(s): 9

Reviewer: lucysnoweDate: 2003-03-30
Reviewid: 25640Chapter: 1
I don't think I've ever really read a fic about Cho or the Grey Lady. I really enjoyed this one. You made Cho real. She wasn't too mopey, and she wasn't suddenly over Cedric. The Grey Lady's story was tragic. Very well written.

Reviewer: CrystalDate: 2003-03-07
Reviewid: 23168Chapter: 1
Very well written and characterized. Thank you for making Cho a sympathetic character. :) She's very human in this fic - I know that I have the same reaction to trauma, I can't sleep a wink, though I've never gone through quite what Cho has. And your Grey Lady reminds me somewhat of Miss Havisham in Dickens' Great Expectations.

Also interesting is the tie-in with the belief that ghosts are those with unfinished business on earth. (I don't know if JKR herself said that or if I read it somewhere else.) The Grey Lady's sorrow keeps her tied to this world and now she realizes that.

Good work!

Reviewer: DanielleDate: 2003-02-09
Reviewid: 19630Chapter: 1
I thought this was a wonderful short story. I've always wanted to know more about the Grey Lady, the only woman of all the house ghosts. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: AvitalDate: 2002-12-31
Reviewid: 14532Chapter: 1
lovely story I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: ronluverDate: 2002-12-06
Reviewid: 11431Chapter: 1
wow. you know fanfics seem to get sadder and sadder. oh well. I loved it. GREAT JOB!!

Reviewer: pubDate: 2002-12-04
Reviewid: 11158Chapter: 1
This is an extremely good story... I am glad someone writes about other characters like Cho.

Reviewer: LilacDate: 2002-12-03
Reviewid: 11006Chapter: 1
Wow! What a great story! For some reason, I don't like Cho very much (reminds me too much of people I hated in high school, me thinks)but this has made her a bit more sympathetic. Thank you for writing it.

Reviewer: Ara KaneDate: 2002-12-03
Reviewid: 10971Chapter: 1
Aaaawwww! I'm not a big Cho fan, even though I did feel for her when Cedric died...anyway, I really enjoyed this story because 1) I got to appreciate Cho a bit more after reading it; and 2) you show that she's not only the Tragic Heroine Who Lost Her True Love. I hope JKR will similarly expand Cho's role in canon.

I also like how the Grey Lady isn't just a dry, poised ghost you'd expect in Ravenclaw. Great job!

Reviewer: maidenjediDate: 2002-12-02
Reviewid: 10956Chapter: 1
Wonderful story! Very touching and probably one of the kindest characterizations of Cho Chang I've read. Thanks for sharing!

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