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Review(s): 39
| Reviewer: hp_girl91 | Date: 2007-05-05 |
| Reviewid: 147942 | Chapter: 1 |
| I really liked it. Very cute! My heart beat in aticipation the whole time, and I got my R/Hr fix! Very good writing. I liked how you kept them in character and brought their thoughts and feelings to life. I also liked the British turmology(sp?)! Very cool! Good show!! |
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| Reviewer: Adriana | Date: 2005-04-21 |
| Reviewid: 120258 | Chapter: 1 |
| That story just made my day. I was listening to a song, damn, I can't remember the name, that was, like, totally perfect with this story. Hopefully, the name will come back to me, and I'll let you know. I love R/H, perfect match, and, of course, fluff is awsome. Also, if you haven't tried H/G, you should, or even D/G, or D/H. Okay, I know it sounds weird, but I've read some good stories. Great story. |
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| Reviewer: lyssa | Date: 2005-03-06 |
| Reviewid: 115722 | Chapter: 1 |
| I think you should make another part, whee harry walks in on them kissing. that would be truly great! lol |
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| Reviewer: Lyssa | Date: 2005-03-06 |
| Reviewid: 115720 | Chapter: 1 |
| that was truly wonderful. it was very short, though. i would have liked it more if they were less straight-forward, and dawdled around that for awile (the key to a good love story), nevertheless, that was really good, and I'll never be able to write like that, so KUDOS! |
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| Reviewer: Sarah Potter | Date: 2005-01-03 |
| Reviewid: 109611 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh that was too sweet. I love R/Hr!! And it was well written and definately fluffy. Very canon too! I really how a scenario similar to this one happens in the books later on! |
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| Reviewer: Angela | Date: 2004-07-22 |
| Reviewid: 93612 | Chapter: 1 |
cute lil' romantic tidbit w/ ron and hermione! very cute-it made me smile :)
Keep writing,
Angela |
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| Reviewer: John Guagliardo | Date: 2004-06-24 |
| Reviewid: 88561 | Chapter: 1 |
| WOW this is good stuff, my friend told me about this place, and this was one of the better ones i have read so far, good job |
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| Reviewer: Val | Date: 2004-05-18 |
| Reviewid: 83341 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, sweet fluff. How absolutely wonderful. I needed somehting like this to read. Very well written and cute. |
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| Reviewer: Katie | Date: 2003-12-05 |
| Reviewid: 61938 | Chapter: 1 |
| omigosh!! sooo cute!! do you write H/G fics?? you should do one like this for them!! aww that was soooo cute!! |
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| Reviewer: Erin | Date: 2003-10-22 |
| Reviewid: 57381 | Chapter: 1 |
| I think that this was a great short fan fiction. But of course I like all fan ficton! Especially stories with romance in it. |
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| Reviewer: fetishized_armadillo | Date: 2003-09-21 |
| Reviewid: 53821 | Chapter: 1 |
| I don't usually enjoy R/Hr fluff but you really are a talented author. The level of detail in this fanfiction is great and your writing is fluid and believable. The characterizations are a tiny bit off but that's understandable: it's hard to write fluff totally in-character. Very nice fanfiction overall. |
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| Reviewer: dragontac | Date: 2003-09-06 |
| Reviewid: 50971 | Chapter: 1 |
| lol. ron is a git. haha. at least he started it though.. makes him seem... uh.. less git-ish |
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| Reviewer: youllshootyoureyeout | Date: 2003-07-01 |
| Reviewid: 39315 | Chapter: 1 |
Whoa...that was fluff if i've ever seen it.
but i enjoy fluff (in fanfiction) more than that dark serious crap.
Well...is there more coming or what? |
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| Reviewer: Belinda Brook | Date: 2003-03-26 |
| Reviewid: 25324 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is a Great beginning to a story, could you please hurry up with the nxt chap, Thxz!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Jenny | Date: 2003-03-01 |
| Reviewid: 22344 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow gd start but i really need sum finished fluff still luv ure writing techniches though |
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