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Review(s): 43
| Reviewer: Marena | Date: 2005-08-05 |
| Reviewid: 128913 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, this is so sad. Picture me sobbing a lot. But it was really good. BUT REALLY SAD!!! |
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| Reviewer: Claire | Date: 2005-06-04 |
| Reviewid: 123319 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love this piece it is very moving and it makes me cry everytime I read it! It's love at it's purest. Thank you so much for writing this! |
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| Reviewer: g weasley | Date: 2004-11-18 |
| Reviewid: 105181 | Chapter: 1 |
| sniff sniff!!! :( thats so sad. Im guessing u wrote this before book 5, if sirius is alive, and voldemort and harry die.... sniff sniff |
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| Reviewer: Nicole | Date: 2004-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 103771 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was sad...I almost feel like crying with Ginny...good story, but I'm not to sure I like the ending... |
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| Reviewer: Geena Waters | Date: 2004-10-18 |
| Reviewid: 101744 | Chapter: 1 |
That was good, but rather depressing at the same time...
So they both died, eh? Voldemort and Harry. That sucks, but good job on the story.
*Geena |
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| Reviewer: Claire | Date: 2004-07-26 |
| Reviewid: 94060 | Chapter: 1 |
| Dis is so sad! i luv it plz rite more of ur excelent stories cos i luv dem so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Narumi | Date: 2003-08-03 |
| Reviewid: 45169 | Chapter: 1 |
| wow, i don't want to be harsh or anything, but that was entirely too melodramatic with nooo plot/character development. this is the first of yours i've read though, so i won't be too judgemental. keep practicing |
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| Reviewer: firewhiskey | Date: 2003-07-25 |
| Reviewid: 43767 | Chapter: 1 |
| blurred screen...so sad! that was really emotional. just one suggestion for any future fics following this same pattern...you should use two different fonts for each character. once i got into it, it didn't seem to matter, but at the start i had to reread a bit to stay on track. keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: Fidelius Femmela | Date: 2003-03-03 |
| Reviewid: 22503 | Chapter: 1 |
wow. that was really emotional. the first hg fic i've seen so far that doesn't end in happiness and kisses. a powerful piece. bravo.
~FF |
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| Reviewer: Cendrillon | Date: 2003-02-21 |
| Reviewid: 21275 | Chapter: 1 |
Mon Dieu!! NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN, Harry don't die, don't let him die in la books (prays to god) I love how Harry says goodbye to his cheri, Ginny. tres bien!!
(I am French, pardon me) |
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| Reviewer: Susan | Date: 2003-02-19 |
| Reviewid: 21064 | Chapter: 1 |
awwwwwwww that was to clever for words! I need more, like "ginnys thoughs as she tryis to survive without her love" Or maybe Ginny goes to try and find Harry's body....anyways your the writter, i am too, but not as good as you!
Your Fan:
Sue |
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| Reviewer: Cherry Blossom | Date: 2003-02-15 |
| Reviewid: 20305 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was pretty good. It was very original. I've never seen anything done like this, or at least not done well. But you did well. Bravo! |
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| Reviewer: Congratulations! | Date: 2003-01-26 |
| Reviewid: 17966 | Chapter: 1 |
| i think it´s great...and actually contrary to another comment i read, it´s marvelous you handle who´s talking without using different fonts or putting names...that shows ur a great writter. Congrats |
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| Reviewer: SparrowChild | Date: 2003-01-15 |
| Reviewid: 16349 | Chapter: 1 |
| oh! oh thats so sad! I first decided to read this because I live very far away from my boyfriend, so I thought I could relate, but wow thats soo sad. very well writtin, but it would have been a little less confusing as to whose talking if you had used different fonts or something. |
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| Reviewer: SacBeagle | Date: 2003-01-15 |
| Reviewid: 16322 | Chapter: 1 |
| WOW - a powerful, moving piece. Very original concept, with the telepathy and all. I really liked Harry's reference to the "The kiss of immense love" that saved him and gave him his scar. It was comforting to think that Harry's final moments of torture a la Cruciatus were overcome by Ginny's love. I'm quite impressed and looking forward to reading more from you! |
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| Reviewer: Alice | Date: 2003-01-08 |
| Reviewid: 15537 | Chapter: 1 |
| Maybe is just me, but I think that would be the most romantic and painless death for harry,...listening to his love´s voice...till the very end...GREAT!!! |
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| Reviewer: majiklmoon | Date: 2002-12-24 |
| Reviewid: 13812 | Chapter: 1 |
| wow, that was really intense - excellent, but intense, and so very very heartbreaking. Great job! |
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| Reviewer: Lourdes | Date: 2002-12-24 |
| Reviewid: 13811 | Chapter: 1 |
| Good attempt. Please write another. Longer. Not telephathic this time... but, well done for the originality. |
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