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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 16

Reviewer: RosieDate: 2005-07-23
Reviewid: 127693Chapter: 1
8.02am - Ow! C’mon, someone must’ve seen him poke me in the back of the head…

8.03am - Someone other than Snape…

ROTFL!!! That was the best. I wish we could have seen the rest of the day.

Reviewer: RhiannonDate: 2004-12-13
Reviewid: 107648Chapter: 1
Ha, ha! That was rather funny! I guess that old bug really did get some justice. I rather liked that.

Reviewer: Paige, The Muggle HermioneDate: 2003-12-03
Reviewid: 61680Chapter: 1
briteyes,
Wow. Hilarious. Shows how much that Edwin Proof knows eh? Very amusing, and well worth the read. There were SO many funny little bits in here, and it would take quite nearly forever to name all of them, so I'll suffice to say that 'Young and Magical' as well as the 7.57, 7.59, and 10.35 entries had me rolling around on the floor. Quite literally. Were you trying to go for a bit of a 'Brigit Jones Diary' style of clipped sentences here? I think that's the image you have achieved, and I like it. Humour is very much your strong point here, and I love it!

Paige, The Muggle Hermione

*looks back over review* I can't believe I got through that with only 1 exclamation MARX...

Reviewer: DanielleDate: 2003-08-30
Reviewid: 49377Chapter: 1
ahahahahahahahahahah...... i love it!!! write more!!!

Reviewer: KimDate: 2003-06-19
Reviewid: 37820Chapter: 1
Brilyant!!! Absolutly hilaryous!!!

Reviewer: DelilaDate: 2003-04-15
Reviewid: 28096Chapter: 1
I like the idea of writing down a charater's thoughts throughout the day..............Update soon!

Reviewer: googligooDate: 2003-04-08
Reviewid: 26915Chapter: 1
hilarious! my fav part is:
"and hagrid's new creature is........... doxies.....
................i miss the BESkrwets."
HAHA

Reviewer: Fidelius FemmelaDate: 2003-04-07
Reviewid: 26874Chapter: 1
I think you should continue Harry's thoughts through-out the day! Very cute, go you.
~FF

Reviewer: JulianeDate: 2003-04-07
Reviewid: 26771Chapter: 1
>Wish I could do ‘Accio’ without a wand. Wand further away than pillow.

4.38am - Damn the pillow. I’ll sleep without it

LOLOL! What a great idea for a story. I also love the Hermione/Ron fight and reconciliation at breakfast as seen from Harry's perspective. There's a very canonical sense of Harry, even though these are just short 'diary' entries. Hilarious, and very skillfully done!

Reviewer: The FrogDate: 2003-02-09
Reviewid: 19647Chapter: 1
Very "Briget Jones's Diary"-esq...not a bad thing! Great job!

Reviewer: Fawkes101Date: 2003-01-25
Reviewid: 17832Chapter: 1
Hilarious story!

Reviewer: MArshaDate: 2002-12-26
Reviewid: 14015Chapter: 1
Very funny... Makes a whol lot of sense... Actually I find myself wanting to know what else happened... Very odd...

Reviewer: Ara KaneDate: 2002-12-26
Reviewid: 13966Chapter: 1
I never got to read about the rest of Harry's day! *pouts* I was laughing about Harry's dealing with Neville's snoring. I'm sensitive to that kind of thing myself and right now airline earplugs work best for me :) I also enjoyed reading about his problems with Ron, Hermione and Draco. LOL! This was a riot to read, Briteyes! Great work!

Reviewer: LilacDate: 2002-12-25
Reviewid: 13901Chapter: 1
That little sfkjsoajfi wfndffjdo Skeeter! I'm glad her career is ending. LOL! Loved these lines:

<<<Note to self: "Knock it off already, will ya?" bad way to resolve conflicts between friends.>>>

and...

<<<10.30am - Care of Magical Creatures. Hagrid appears to have new project for us. Hope this is better than the Blast-Ended Skrewts from last year.

10.31am - And Hagrid’s new creature is…

10.32am - …Doxies.

10.35am - I miss the Blast-Ended Skrewts.">>>

Thanks for a great little ficlet!

Reviewer: Talking Purple RabbitsDate: 2002-12-25
Reviewid: 13896Chapter: 1
heeheehee...You've really captured Harry's head, you know. :)

"With that, she turned on one spiked heel and stormed out of the office, trying to look as though this hadn’t been her tenth rejection this week, that she didn’t know her career was at an end."

Awww....poor Rita! Excellent ending.

ta,
~TPR

Reviewer: StereoMDate: 2002-12-24
Reviewid: 13886Chapter: 1
Yay! It's here! The first time I read this I did completely not expect the Rita Skeeter to be in it. Heh.

Completely cute and FUNNY, this is. :D And dude, I'm in the author's notes. Wow. Hee.

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