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Review(s): 24
| Reviewer: MuggleForMagic | Date: 2007-09-19 |
| Reviewid: 149340 | Chapter: 1 |
| Loved it that was sweet and she used the spell for the assigment awwww (R/Hr moments ROCK!!!!!!) |
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| Reviewer: Dina C. | Date: 2004-01-29 |
| Reviewid: 68818 | Chapter: 1 |
| Laughed out loud at the chess pieces in tiny deck chairs! So much better than the typical late-at-night-in-the-common-room scenarios that everyone else writes. Makes me want to read more! Keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: Paige Knorr (The Muggle Hermione) | Date: 2003-07-07 |
| Reviewid: 40631 | Chapter: 1 |
Dear Author,
This story really touched me. I have been accused by family, friends and foe alike to be the muggle version of Hermione. (I have things hanging in my room that say 'I love school'). I know what Hermione would be feeling and this is exactly it. The way she used 'Wingardium Leviosa' at the end was absolutely touching and perfect, might I add. The only fault I can find is that Ron mightn't have been so outright, but whatever. The way you had Ron incorperate humer in a serious, romantic situation was so incomprehensibly Ron that even now I am still wondering if the wonderful J.K. Rowling hasn't written this under a false name. Thank you for writing this inspirational piece of work.
From,
Paige Knorr |
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| Reviewer: C'est moi, Bleu! | Date: 2003-01-07 |
| Reviewid: 15487 | Chapter: 1 |
Hey Cherub, Tikal, and Tora [if you're the Tora we know ;)]! *waves*
I already told you I loved your ficlet. Told you it's very Sugarquill-y! *wink* Like everyone said, keep writing! Write a sequel!
Long live R/H! |
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| Reviewer: Hermione @ Heart | Date: 2003-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 14887 | Chapter: 1 |
That left me better than it came to me. Smiling!
Really cute work!
I love this line: “And then… you went off to the toilets – ”
“Only because someone was being a real prat.” She said, looking a little putout. Ron had the grace to look ashamed.
Cheers! |
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| Reviewer: CurlsOfgold | Date: 2003-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 14848 | Chapter: 1 |
| perfect!! and i was thinking the same thing about the love potions thing in the book...it´s like you have read my thoughts! hehe, keep going |
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| Reviewer: Tora | Date: 2003-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 14796 | Chapter: 1 |
| Your story is amazing, awesome, fantastic and all those other words which vaguely grasp what I'm trying to say. Oh yeah, and it's cute ;). |
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| Reviewer: UndomielAnon | Date: 2003-01-02 |
| Reviewid: 14785 | Chapter: 1 |
Beautiful! Just... beautiful! Simply ...why that was... well now... absolutely corking! And it was so- oooooh *squeals* -well you get the picture. And they were so sweet and it was so- eeeek it was all so in-tune and everything. LOVED the chess pieces!
Hurry up and write some more stories! Or a sequel to this one! Yes, a sequel!
*strokes computer screen, waiting* my preciousssss.... |
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| Reviewer: Ellyse | Date: 2003-01-01 |
| Reviewid: 14750 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hee hee, I loved the little chessmen enjoying the show. As did I, a brilliant little ficlet. Well done. |
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| Reviewer: Cathy | Date: 2003-01-01 |
| Reviewid: 14745 | Chapter: 1 |
What a sweet story! I really enjoyed reading it! Are you planning to write a sequel or anything? What happens the next morning?
Cathy |
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| Reviewer: EmilyKate | Date: 2003-01-01 |
| Reviewid: 14734 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow! I haven't read anything else by you, nor do I know if you HAVE any other works but I must say this was a wonderful story and I DO hope you continue to write. ;) |
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| Reviewer: Tikal | Date: 2003-01-01 |
| Reviewid: 14731 | Chapter: 1 |
Cherub! Ah, it's been so long...
Well, you already know I love this, so I suppose there really is no point in me telling you.
But just in case you've forgotten, this is absolutely adorable. ^_^ |
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| Reviewer: Laura | Date: 2003-01-01 |
| Reviewid: 14729 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow! That was truly amazing. It's nice to read a story where Ron and Hermione truly get along outside Harry's presence. Do you have any other stories outside of the sugar quill? I'd like to read more of your work, you have great talent! Keep writing! :) |
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