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Review(s): 45
| Reviewer: Anna | Date: 2004-05-26 |
| Reviewid: 84619 | Chapter: 1 |
That was... intense. Blimey, you wrote that really well.
Not to be a broken record, but...
SEQUEL, I SAY!!! |
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| Reviewer: One By One The Penguins Steal My Sanity | Date: 2004-04-12 |
| Reviewid: 78245 | Chapter: 1 |
| This fic is mind-blowing! Harry is so sweet and Ginny is juuust right. I'll say it again: SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pretty please with sugar on top?!?!?!?!?!?!? |
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| Reviewer: One By OneThe Penguins Steal My Sanity | Date: 2004-04-12 |
| Reviewid: 78242 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wowee!This is a terrific little fic. pllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssepleasepleasepleaseplease*takes deep breath*pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write a sequel. u rox my sox!! |
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| Reviewer: One By OneThe Penguins Steal My Sanity | Date: 2004-04-12 |
| Reviewid: 78241 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wowee!This is a terrific little fic. pllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssepleasepleasepleaseplease*takes deep breath*pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee write a sequel. u rox my sox!! |
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| Reviewer: firewhiskey | Date: 2003-09-22 |
| Reviewid: 53929 | Chapter: 1 |
| *sigh* so sweet. i love these tender moments between h/g. you should continue on this trend and elaborate on their relationship. |
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| Reviewer: Paige Knorr (The Muggle Hermione) | Date: 2003-09-08 |
| Reviewid: 51343 | Chapter: 1 |
Dear Brin Bran,
EEE!! YAY!! EE!! YAY!! H/G!! So sweet... nicely described. EEEEEEEHHHHHh! I love H/G. Too much R/H in the world, not enough H/G. R/H evil. (well.. not EVIl, just not right.. ergh) But H/G PERFECT! EE! I'm hurting myself writing this... too much EE-ing... Amazingly fluffy little story which I loved.
Paige |
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| Reviewer: Brittany | Date: 2003-08-06 |
| Reviewid: 45733 | Chapter: 1 |
This was really good. I love the way you described everything so clearly, it painted the picture in my mind. Great job! Is this all of it, or are you continuing it?
B.A.Potter |
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| Reviewer: Sarah | Date: 2003-05-10 |
| Reviewid: 31478 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love the descriptions of Harry in this. I got chills. You really are a very talented writer. |
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| Reviewer: Lilac | Date: 2003-02-23 |
| Reviewid: 21660 | Chapter: 1 |
| Just had to read this wonderful bit of fluffy angst, or "flangst" as Calixa has dubbed the combo. It's one of my favorites! Thanks for writing it! |
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| Reviewer: Rika | Date: 2003-01-14 |
| Reviewid: 16244 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was lovely. I think that it would make an excellent full-story if you added the before and after, but it stands well by itself too. |
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| Reviewer: Cristina | Date: 2003-01-12 |
| Reviewid: 15932 | Chapter: 1 |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww ::breath:: awwwwwww
It brought tears to my eyes, I love fluff soooo much :) You should continue! |
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| Reviewer: amanda | Date: 2003-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 15906 | Chapter: 1 |
| That was sooo cute.. I think that you should definatly write more to it! Please, even just to satisfy my selfish need to read more lol :) |
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| Reviewer: rose | Date: 2003-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 15892 | Chapter: 1 |
that was..... fantsatic, not really lovey dovey and unreal ,but strong and real. it put more depth into the characters than i have seen in a long time!!
i hope u continue |
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| Reviewer: fizzingwhizbee | Date: 2003-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 15891 | Chapter: 1 |
Utterly Gorgeous. Really Sweet. I loved how you captured Ginny's emotions in this fic- and as others have said before, it has just the right blend of angstiness and fluff.
To me, this seems a really beleivable of how Ginny's love for HArry has matured- that it is not just a first-year crush anymore. Great work and hope to see more from you! |
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| Reviewer: CurlsOfGold | Date: 2003-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 15864 | Chapter: 1 |
that was so...Wow!..i havenīt got words to describe how much i like it!..it īs so sweet!! i donīt know if it is the words you choose or the way you explain but that was one of the best H/G I īve ever read!....youīve got lots of talent and i hope you continue this amazing story soon
bye! |
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| Reviewer: harpinred | Date: 2003-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 15847 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh Brin, that was lovely! So poignant and sweet. I admire people that can write well written angst and you wrote my favorite kind - resloved! LOL
I loved livingin Ginny's head for this and I think you captured her very well. I don't know if you planned on writing any more to this but a sequal would be really nice.
Excellent job!
Monique/Harpinred |
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| Reviewer: Sharon | Date: 2003-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 15837 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is the first time I've indulged in H/G fluff... and dang, this was good. It had just enough suspense and awkwardness behind it to make you truly happy when everything turned up all sugar and roses at the end. Your description was really nice - especially the scent! People forget about scent so many times in writing, but anyway... The only little thing I saw is when you were talking about draughts through the house. Isn't it the other type of drafts that you get blowing through a house? I've always been under the opinion that draughts were like a pint of beer or a cup of potion... Oo;; Other than that, this was excellent. You may have gotten me addicted to fluff. Just for that, you've got to write more. |
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| Reviewer: Teresina Dragonwagon | Date: 2003-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 15828 | Chapter: 1 |
Aaaaaaww...how cuuuuuuute...ohh, I needed that. It has been a very long week, and fluff ALWAYS makes me feel better...^_________^ Yay for H/G!
Keep writing! |
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| Reviewer: loonie | Date: 2003-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 15816 | Chapter: 1 |
| Yes! That was absolutaly mind- blowing! I loved it --SOOOOO SWEET!!!! Please write more soon!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Grace | Date: 2003-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 15804 | Chapter: 1 |
| Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewer: Lourdes | Date: 2003-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 15791 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is very good. Seems to be plucked out from a whole novel and yet, by itself, it is complete... and yes, A-OK. |
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| Reviewer: Lilac | Date: 2003-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 15787 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love this! YES! Perfect way for H/G to happen! Not too fluffy and not too angsty...it's just right! Gryffindor Tower.net would love this as well! Thanks for writing it! |
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| Reviewer: Ara Kane | Date: 2003-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 15783 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was so sweet :) I liked how Ginny was thinking about Harry even as they were floundering outside the cabin and the excruciating details about Harry taking her hand and everything (leading up to the kiss) when they were inside. Great job! |
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| Reviewer: Corgi | Date: 2003-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 15777 | Chapter: 1 |
| LOL! Yes, fluff, but nicely done (and not overwrought). They'd love you over at Gryffindor Tower if you haven't been there yet. |
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| Reviewer: Farie | Date: 2003-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 15774 | Chapter: 1 |
| cool. I REALLY love that line "I'm bloody entitled" that was so awsome-- as soon as I read it I wanted to steal that line for one of MY fanfics! very nice fic overall |
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| Reviewer: Cadenza | Date: 2003-01-10 |
| Reviewid: 15755 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aaaaahhh! Stop and smell the fluff. The "Let the tears run, Im bloody entitled, she thought, and almost chuckled at the image of Ron that came to her mind" is so in character for the exhaustion and truth that any character should feel after trauma, especially Ginny--especially the final confrontation. I liked it! |
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