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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: GryffinMiraur | Date: 2003-10-30 |
| Reviewid: 58357 | Chapter: 1 |
| I'm very impressed with this. I never thought of it like that before. That Peter would have to betray his friends to save others. You did a very good job. |
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| Reviewer: GryffinMiraur | Date: 2003-10-30 |
| Reviewid: 58356 | Chapter: 1 |
| I'm very impressed with this. I never thought of it like that before. That Peter would have to betray his friends to save others. You did a very good job. |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2003-05-17 |
| Reviewid: 32433 | Chapter: 1 |
| I'm glad you got tired of Peter as a bad guy; you masterfully metamorphosed him to the evil rat we know him to be in canon. Thanks for nice read. Keep writing. |
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| Reviewer: lucysnowe | Date: 2003-04-05 |
| Reviewid: 26533 | Chapter: 1 |
| I'm not sure if I believe the idea that Peter was as faultless as he seems in this story. However, I think your fic presents an interesting alternative to Evil!Peter. I, like you, don't like how he is often portrayed in fan fic. He was a Gryffindor and a close friend of James, and people tend to forget or ignore that. I'm glad you didn't. I liked that Peter was friendly with Trelawney. Creative use of her first prediction! Nice work. |
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| Reviewer: B. Nonymous | Date: 2003-01-22 |
| Reviewid: 17266 | Chapter: 1 |
Interesting... Peter's betrayal as part of a grander scheme. You paint Wormtail as a hero from the beginning this way. I wonder, though, given this scheme, why Peter would aid Voldemort post-PoA, given your scenario?
To be honest, if Trelawney had said that Harry would DESTROY Voldie, then I see motivation for Peter to continue to aid Voldemort until there was an opportunity for Harry to DESTROY him.
Still, it's an interesting picture - I would like to see its conclusion. |
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| Reviewer: VJA | Date: 2003-01-21 |
| Reviewid: 17168 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh, my God - what a truly brilliant story. Very moving. And poor Peter. This is definitely one of the best, if not THE best, "why-Peter-betrayed-the-Potters" fic I have EVER read. Please, please write more of this. |
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