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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: truefairy008 | Date: 2006-07-15 |
| Reviewid: 144181 | Chapter: 1 |
| wow i like it specially th last line hermione said.. "you'll always be my knight" awwww that's really adorable and cute hehe |
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| Reviewer: klaudia | Date: 2004-07-29 |
| Reviewid: 94588 | Chapter: 1 |
| This made me want to cry, a little... I like the way you make things clear and yet leave them unspoken. "Why didn't he say anything?!" was the first thing I thought at the end. Luckily, there's still one year of school left :-) |
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| Reviewer: Sarah | Date: 2003-04-30 |
| Reviewid: 30111 | Chapter: 1 |
I really really liked it. I like that you didn't actually have them admit their feelings to each other, but we, as the audience, know that they feel the same way.
Awesome story! ;) |
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| Reviewer: lifesend | Date: 2003-02-04 |
| Reviewid: 18902 | Chapter: 1 |
| itsu, the story's even better the second time I read it! Would you write a sequel? please, pretty please write a sequel! you can't end it like that! and what's the name of the song you used? I wanna download it! |
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| Reviewer: Dina | Date: 2003-02-03 |
| Reviewid: 18846 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was just wonderful... But the ending`s so sad...I`m still positive they`ll make it |
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| Reviewer: Ara Kane | Date: 2003-02-03 |
| Reviewid: 18760 | Chapter: 1 |
| Forgot to add that I really liked how you put "Finite Incantatem" instead of plain old "The End." |
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| Reviewer: Ara Kane | Date: 2003-02-03 |
| Reviewid: 18757 | Chapter: 1 |
| THAT'S IT??? I wanted to read about them finally sorting things out! But then I can see JKR prolonging the R/H agony by having Ron sloooowly realize that he loves Hermione, then sloooowly thinking about how he's going to tell her, then...OK, I'm rambling. Anyway, I liked this story a lot. I loved the memories you put in, even though I initially thought they were in a car accident :D Ron's vow to protect his friends was wonderful *sniffle* and his thinking about being the Best Man so in-character. And then Hermione expressing her love after he'd gone was a nice touch. Good job! |
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| Reviewer: Athena | Date: 2003-02-02 |
| Reviewid: 18717 | Chapter: 1 |
| oh! I've got tears in my eyes. So Ron to be so clueless! Of COURSE she likes him back, the doofus! so cute, and very in canon! |
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| Reviewer: CalliaFindlestone | Date: 2003-02-01 |
| Reviewid: 18647 | Chapter: 1 |
| Oh my goodness! ::cries uncontollably:: That was beautiful, Itsu! And so sad, as well. The song you used was brilliant, and, of course, I listened to it while I read. The atmosphere it made was perfect. Please tell me there's more!! It's too bittersweet. |
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