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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Two Proposals Later
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: QUad_b_fandgDate: 2006-04-01
Reviewid: 141540Chapter: 1
umm when i clicked on this i thought it would be about james and lily not your sick twisted fantasy... you are a disgrace to the name cassie and i now shun you and your freak story.

Reviewer: AccentDate: 2005-06-09
Reviewid: 123504Chapter: 1
Umm, it could use some tuning:1)Spelling and Grammer errors, next time, make sure to speel check for errors 2)It didn't seem to hve much of a point.3)The Sugar Quill didn't seem to have or serve any purpose. 4)I think next time before you submitt it, check through it for mistakes and see if you could make it better. I have a question: Who is Romulus? I know were you probably go the name from(Remus& Romulus were supposedly the sons of Mars (Aries) and raised by a wolf, as well as forming Rome.) but as far as the fic. goes, I don't understand who he ws supposed to be.

Reviewer: carlyDate: 2004-02-07
Reviewid: 69833Chapter: 1
this story really didnt have much point. there were spelling and grammatical errors everywhere. put a little more work into it next time.

Reviewer: CatherineDate: 2003-09-04
Reviewid: 50637Chapter: 1
The story could use a bit of smoothing out. I think you have a good basic idea for a plot, but I'd like a little more action, and definitely some more background.

Nice names! I liked Romulus.

Catherine

Reviewer: SarahDate: 2003-08-27
Reviewid: 48942Chapter: 1
I dont understand.

Reviewer: *Gin*Date: 2003-05-20
Reviewid: 32914Chapter: 1
*This is cool, but you need 2 fix Ur spelling/unpardonables; it's a bit hard 2 understand and U have 2 read everything twice to get what it's saying. I like it, though!*

Reviewer: DidiDate: 2002-08-21
Reviewid: 2741Chapter: 1
Hahahahaha. That was funny and so cute at the same time. I like that in Fan Fiction. I love James and Lily storys.

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