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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Boys And Girls
Review(s): 174

Reviewer: lardonDate: 2008-04-13
Reviewid: 150773Chapter: 3
So bad you stopped... I'm quite disappointed to see something so good started and not finished. Well, that's life to see things unfinished. Bye bye

Reviewer: SlugClubMemberDate: 2007-07-13
Reviewid: 148536Chapter: 3
Oh this story is amazing!!! You keep them all in character very nicely!

Reviewer: lemondrops8Date: 2006-08-08
Reviewid: 144693Chapter: 3
its really getting good!! please continue writing!!

Reviewer: sherbertlemons19Date: 2006-07-20
Reviewid: 144308Chapter: 3
dear abigail,
just read ur story, it was brill, i had to keep on reading to see how they all felt.
I loved the way you wrote in different point of views, I can't wait to read the next chapters, write them soon
pppplllleeaaassse

from another fan - catherine from england

Reviewer: truefairy008Date: 2006-07-15
Reviewid: 144172Chapter: 3
oh come on continue writing this story! finish what you started!

Reviewer: Greenie72Date: 2006-01-03
Reviewid: 137938Chapter: 3
very nice! please continue!

Reviewer: GinOviaDate: 2005-11-14
Reviewid: 135847Chapter: 1
Are you ever gonna finish this? I have read the stories that go a long with this.They're very good. I hope you pick this up again soon and finish what you started!

Reviewer: HPgalDate: 2005-10-29
Reviewid: 135357Chapter: 1
ARE YOU EVER GOING TO WRITE A SEQUEL? HURRY UP!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR SERIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LarantiaDate: 2005-10-14
Reviewid: 134486Chapter: 3
Totally cool! Can we get sequels? HURRY!!!

Reviewer: Magic MasterDate: 2005-10-08
Reviewid: 133983Chapter: 3
Wow..
Its amazing, I love all your stories, Please finish!!!!

Reviewer: luctiyaDate: 2005-10-04
Reviewid: 133734Chapter: 3
I don't BELIEVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You stopped THERE???????
Sorry. I only found the story now.
HURRY UP HURRY UP HURRY UP

Reviewer: emjayDate: 2005-10-02
Reviewid: 133585Chapter: 3
ooohh

i love it!!!
its so perfect...

please finish!!!!!

Reviewer: Weasley_lurves_Granger3Date: 2005-09-13
Reviewid: 132443Chapter: 3
Yay! *does favorite ships dance* Write more!!!

Reviewer: Liz ParkerDate: 2005-09-10
Reviewid: 132207Chapter: 3
I really like this story, I cant wait for the next chapter! Please hurry!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Seedy BeaDate: 2005-08-05
Reviewid: 128874Chapter: 3
this is a relly good fanfic. so would you please PLEASE PLEASE finish it!?

Reviewer: TwinkieDate: 2005-07-23
Reviewid: 127660Chapter: 3
Are you ever going to get the fourth chapter updated? Your story is awesome and I find it so funny to watch as Harry and Ron fall deeper into love! Update soon!

Reviewer: DevynnDate: 2005-07-20
Reviewid: 127437Chapter: 3
Chapter 4!!!!! Quick!!!Fast!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!Hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: StephanieDate: 2005-07-20
Reviewid: 127436Chapter: 3
Pleasepleasepleaseplease come out with the next chapter soon!!!! I sqeaked very loudly when I scrolled down and discovered that it ended there and the next chapter hadn't been written yet!! (Just ask my friend, she nearly fell off her chair when I sqeaked!) Excellent work, as always!

Reviewer: sic itur ad astraDate: 2005-06-15
Reviewid: 124068Chapter: 3
Come on! Upload the next chapter quick! I'm on the edge of my seat here and about to fall off!

Reviewer: KimberlyDate: 2005-06-11
Reviewid: 123755Chapter: 3
I loved it! perty please come out with chapter 4 soon.

Reviewer: ClaireDate: 2005-06-04
Reviewid: 123316Chapter: 3
Hi there! This is a really sweet piece and I hope you finish it off soon! Thanks

Reviewer: Geena WatersDate: 2005-06-01
Reviewid: 123175Chapter: 3
Oh good job! I can't wait for more...you are planning on writing more aren't you?????? *looks eagerly to Abigail...needs to know there will be more in the future* PU-LEEEEEZE!!!!!! I love it. It entertains me and sticks with my favourite ships: R/Hr & H/G!!!

I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!


Although I somehow have the vague feeling I've read this story before...

~GW

Reviewer: SarahDate: 2005-05-26
Reviewid: 122749Chapter: 3
Oh! I *hate* reading unfinished stories, because I get so caught up in them, and just as I begin to really love them, they end! Shame on you for not updating this marvelous piece of work! I really love this story; I've read the preludes to it and found them just wonderful as well. I can understand what Harry's feeling: it's hard to figure out if you're in love with your friend when you suddenly realize how attractive and irresistable they are, but aren't quite sure if they're the right kind of attractive and irresistable *you're* looking for. I love this story; it's extremely cute and happy -- I found myself grinning and my heart fluttering several times as I read. Please update soon -- I'm dying to see what happens next!

Reviewer: LilyDate: 2005-05-11
Reviewid: 121910Chapter: 3
LOVE THE STORY!!!please update soon!

Reviewer: Another somebody, again...Date: 2005-04-20
Reviewid: 120149Chapter: 3
Abigail is such a talented and entertaining writer. Damn her (him?)!

What? Damn her?

Noooo, it wasn't Abigails fault, anyway.

:-P

"She felt the urge to kick both Ron and Hermione out of the way and sit next to him..."
was only one of the various passages that made me laugh. I hope to find more chapters soon...

Reviewer: Fresh_AngelBabeDate: 2005-04-18
Reviewid: 119853Chapter: 3
You've really got a flair for writing! Keep it up!

Reviewer: MarcellaDate: 2005-04-11
Reviewid: 119273Chapter: 3
Very good,I have liked all of your stories that i've read!Please write the next chapter soon!

Reviewer: EmDate: 2005-02-04
Reviewid: 112972Chapter: 3
Oh no!!!! You didn't finish it yet!!!!! NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Hurry up, quick, finish it! I can't stand it!

Reviewer: KevinDate: 2005-01-27
Reviewid: 112201Chapter: 3
Great stories! Can't wait until you finish the next chapter :D

Reviewer: WapuDate: 2005-01-06
Reviewid: 110023Chapter: 1
Please, Please, Please, PLEASE write some more chapters!!!

Reviewer: SilvestriaDate: 2005-01-01
Reviewid: 109454Chapter: 3
Great story! Am loving it. Do upload more soon. :)

Reviewer: AllieDate: 2004-12-18
Reviewid: 108040Chapter: 3
I love the way you write. It seems to have its own personality, not just a branch off of someone elses. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: GennipherDate: 2004-12-12
Reviewid: 107590Chapter: 3
Hey i love this story and i hope you get done with the fourth chapter soon..!

Reviewer: !!!Date: 2004-12-04
Reviewid: 106849Chapter: 3
Write faaaaaast

Reviewer: joleneDate: 2004-12-02
Reviewid: 106631Chapter: 3
great story so far! come up with the nxt chapter asap, please!

Reviewer: HattieDate: 2004-11-27
Reviewid: 106125Chapter: 3
Loving it! Please write more!

Reviewer: TashaDate: 2004-11-24
Reviewid: 105795Chapter: 3
Hi! This is just plain fun to read! Of course, romantic that I am, I always enjoy thinking about how these situations might develop. I really like your changes in POV--it is coming out evenly isn't it? And of course I can't wait for Hermione's....

Reviewer: SofiaDate: 2004-11-08
Reviewid: 103962Chapter: 3
darling, you need to keep writing. its bloody brilliant. although you may want to make the chapters a bit longer. (there kinda short)

chao,
sofia

Reviewer: wanapepeDate: 2004-11-07
Reviewid: 103695Chapter: 3
Hey! Why did you have to stop there?!? It was brilliant! I can't wait for the rest!Please hurry!

Reviewer: sophieDate: 2004-10-26
Reviewid: 102514Chapter: 3
ooooh, carry on please! this story's so cute I want more!!!

Reviewer: DianaDate: 2004-10-23
Reviewid: 102218Chapter: 3
all i want you to do is make the stories longer because you hold me in suspense for to long and i hate that. but i like your stories alot but make them longer!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Geena WatersDate: 2004-10-18
Reviewid: 101752Chapter: 3
YES!! I want to know what was happenning with Ron and Hermione!!! This was cute and I like how you didn't rush into things with Harry and Ginny, it's more real this way.....I can't wait for the next part!

*Geena

Reviewer: Geena WatersDate: 2004-10-18
Reviewid: 101749Chapter: 1
I love the way Ron was all nervous and worried about how he looked and stuff, lol. That was pricless and so full of awesomeness!!!! I will read the rest in a bit....my teacher needs the computer, yes I am at school :P.

*Geena

Reviewer: samiDate: 2004-10-18
Reviewid: 101718Chapter: 1
awwwwww
i always wanted ron/hermione and harry/ginny to get together. its so cute. and you are doing a GREAT job writing it!

Reviewer: gavriellaDate: 2004-10-17
Reviewid: 101705Chapter: 3
your stories are great! Pleaaaaaaaaaaase write more!!!!!!

Reviewer: StephDate: 2004-10-16
Reviewid: 101610Chapter: 3
Hey! don't give up on this one it's really cute. Keep writing please!!!

Reviewer: TonyDate: 2004-08-08
Reviewid: 96323Chapter: 3
I really liked your story, especially the alternative POV and the nervousness between the four of them :) It just seems so real since they've been JUST friends (or 'Ron's little sister' in Ginny's case) for so long :)

It's just beatiful...

So, PRETTY PLEASE, write more SOON! We've been waiting for such a long time now! :)

Reviewer: idkDate: 2004-07-30
Reviewid: 94773Chapter: 3
r u gonna finish it?

Reviewer: RossyDate: 2004-07-13
Reviewid: 92242Chapter: 3
Woooww, Abigail, your story it's damn good, please keep writing...

Reviewer: cheeseDate: 2004-07-09
Reviewid: 91427Chapter: 3
sequel! plez, this is so sweet...i luv it!

Reviewer: AstridDate: 2004-07-07
Reviewid: 91091Chapter: 3
Please, please update! You haven't in a year and this is so good! I loved Ron's line about how he could have Harry's sister and Harry could have Ron's. Please update soon!

Reviewer: samiDate: 2004-06-27
Reviewid: 89165Chapter: 3
update update! i need my next chapter fix

Reviewer: FluMaXedDate: 2004-06-26
Reviewid: 88934Chapter: 3
how could u b so mean....all the lil people are depending on u to update....but u don't...*sob*...plzzzz.....

Reviewer: michelleDate: 2004-06-23
Reviewid: 88365Chapter: 3
ooo wicked!
when are you updating this?
i hope soon
bumps for you!
bye bye
Shelle

Reviewer: EmmaDate: 2004-06-21
Reviewid: 88109Chapter: 3
write the rest! I want to know what happens!

Reviewer: ChristineDate: 2004-06-21
Reviewid: 88048Chapter: 1
Aw, c'mon how long do we have to wait for a sequel? That was great fun! lol

Reviewer: Michael BlumeDate: 2004-06-15
Reviewid: 87245Chapter: 3
Clearly you've abandoned this site and all of us forever.

Still, on the off-chance you haven't, please finish!

Reviewer: JuleDate: 2004-06-09
Reviewid: 86612Chapter: 3
write the next chapter pleasssssse!!!!!!!!!!!!! all the prologs and epilogs and this have been really goood. keep going!

Reviewer: July 31Date: 2004-06-06
Reviewid: 86048Chapter: 3
Awesome! Update PLEASE!

Reviewer: BrennaDate: 2004-06-05
Reviewid: 86013Chapter: 3
??????????????HURRY HURRY HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: graceDate: 2004-05-29
Reviewid: 85181Chapter: 1
your stories are really awesome but i've notices that you havnt writen in a long time. any hoope for a new story any time soon?

Reviewer: sarahDate: 2004-05-20
Reviewid: 83714Chapter: 3
next PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: EndicottDate: 2004-05-16
Reviewid: 82855Chapter: 3
Wheres the next chapter? Ilove this story it's really good

Reviewer: HMS R/HDate: 2004-04-03
Reviewid: 77033Chapter: 3
AAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.......UPDATE.........

Reviewer: JinnyDate: 2004-03-30
Reviewid: 76504Chapter: 3
I love your stories. I've read all of them. I just gobble them up. Your great. I have been all over the Sugarquill web site for a long time now and you are only the second writer to get my full attention and fanhood. Please keep writeing. I can't wait for the nest chapter. O and I love the changing POV's good job.

Reviewer: blindDate: 2004-03-30
Reviewid: 76398Chapter: 3
AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!update.......u hav 2.....imma dieing......die evil cliffies...eeeee...ronniekiez
~weasley for eva

Reviewer: nazDate: 2004-03-30
Reviewid: 76396Chapter: 1
plezz......plezzzzz........update...itz killing...not noeiing wutz gonna happen...mionez pov...augghhhhh

Reviewer: sugar bubblesDate: 2004-03-27
Reviewid: 76016Chapter: 3
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! i can't take it anymore!!!!!!!! i need to know what happens!!!!!!! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

Reviewer: CornedBeeDate: 2004-03-01
Reviewid: 72795Chapter: 3
Very nice so far. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: rose0411Date: 2004-02-18
Reviewid: 71291Chapter: 3
Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need to know wat happens with both ships

P.S. ur a realy good writer

Reviewer: jamuDate: 2004-02-13
Reviewid: 70510Chapter: 3
finish writing the next chapter! i can't wait!

Reviewer: Kit BlackDate: 2004-02-09
Reviewid: 69994Chapter: 3
Fantastic! Please finish this delightful story.
Kit Black

Reviewer: Angel StreetDate: 2004-02-08
Reviewid: 69925Chapter: 3
ARG! stupid stupid cliffies of yours!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Angel*

Reviewer: amanda singerDate: 2004-01-23
Reviewid: 68104Chapter: 3
I loved this!!! keep writing more,i am hanging on the edge of my seat aaaahhh harry and ginnny!! yeah!

Reviewer: US HP fanDate: 2004-01-05
Reviewid: 65924Chapter: 1
I hope you add more soon! Great story please continue.

Reviewer: JamieBellDate: 2004-01-03
Reviewid: 65680Chapter: 3
Very cute! I look forward to the next update...

Reviewer: Hermione needs 2b a Weasley!Date: 2004-01-03
Reviewid: 65620Chapter: 3
OH! You have to post more soon!!! this is great! YES! yes, I want to know about R/Hr!!! Hurry, hurry, hurry!!! I love this!!!

Reviewer: Papercut DragonDate: 2003-12-25
Reviewid: 64829Chapter: 1
I Think that You should see A A A Papercut Dragon's wizard portrait.

Reviewer: kateDate: 2003-10-27
Reviewid: 58019Chapter: 3
That was sooooooo cute. Write more! I loved it. bye bye for now..................................
Kate

Reviewer: JulieDate: 2003-10-08
Reviewid: 55847Chapter: 3
March? That's so long! Hurry up! great story.

Reviewer: MissBrooke06Date: 2003-10-08
Reviewid: 55809Chapter: 3
I really loved this story and the whole series of them and than I discovered you hadn't updated since MARCH! March! PLEASE... write more soon!

Reviewer: BethDate: 2003-09-13
Reviewid: 52290Chapter: 3
Ooooo, i love it! R/H and H/G fics are adorable! Please write more soon!!!
Beth xxx

Reviewer: KariDate: 2003-09-10
Reviewid: 51754Chapter: 3
Awesome story! I hope you have the next chapter up soon!

Reviewer: MargaretSDate: 2003-09-07
Reviewid: 51044Chapter: 3
Come on! Hurry it up! If you don't hurry up, I'll go nutters.PLEASE HURRY UP!
Your chaps are awesome! COME ON GIRL, YOU CAN DO IT!

Reviewer: hgDate: 2003-09-06
Reviewid: 50944Chapter: 3
more. i want more. give me more. sweet. I WANT SNOGGING! Sorry but im tired. it's late. my cat's barfing up something. i need to sleep.

Reviewer: lineDate: 2003-09-01
Reviewid: 49964Chapter: 3
write more...
hurry up...please...

Reviewer: celestina blackDate: 2003-08-28
Reviewid: 49043Chapter: 3
oh NO!!!
wheres the next chapter!?!?!!?
*waaahhh*
but, i will take this time to compliment your writing and your wonderful portrayl of the characters. very very right and real
please post the next soon!
can u email me when the next chapters up?

Reviewer: cel blackDate: 2003-08-28
Reviewid: 49042Chapter: 2
And to her horror and delight, Harry pronounced the most beautiful words she had ever heard, “I’ll join you.”

*grins silly*

Reviewer: cel blackDate: 2003-08-28
Reviewid: 49041Chapter: 1
Harry stared in amazement. “Ron, Fred and George are out there, do you really want me to close the door, with both of us inside?”

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH

Reviewer: AllieDate: 2003-08-19
Reviewid: 47917Chapter: 3
your story is really good. pls update soon. i'm dying to know what happened next.

Reviewer: SuzieDate: 2003-08-19
Reviewid: 47758Chapter: 3
WRITE MORE!!! NOW!!! This is really really gud! Please update soon! The suspense is killing me!

Reviewer: IpoDate: 2003-08-17
Reviewid: 47500Chapter: 3
When are you going to finish the story? I'm dying of curiosity!

Reviewer: no oneDate: 2003-08-11
Reviewid: 46575Chapter: 3
u have to update

Reviewer: the 10th weaslyDate: 2003-08-05
Reviewid: 45595Chapter: 3
great story !! but I can't get further that the fourth chapter y'know what thats all about?
hugs

Reviewer: RobinDate: 2003-08-04
Reviewid: 45326Chapter: 3
Okay, finished!
Okay, now go back to Ron and Hermione! I want to know what happens there! Really this is an amazing idea, do more with it! CONTINUE!!!!

Reviewer: no oneDate: 2003-08-04
Reviewid: 45325Chapter: 3
did u die or something UPDATE!!!!!!

Reviewer: NarumiDate: 2003-08-03
Reviewid: 45171Chapter: 3
muuuuch better than the lowest one on this list! but you haven't updated since march... does that mean you quit writing?

Reviewer: AshleyDate: 2003-08-03
Reviewid: 45145Chapter: 3
You HAVE to finish this story. I need to know what happens. Please write soon!!

Reviewer: BrittanyDate: 2003-08-01
Reviewid: 44903Chapter: 3
oo what a lovely story! Very funny and sweet, write more soon please!

Brittany

Reviewer: featherDate: 2003-08-01
Reviewid: 44899Chapter: 3
This is such a cute grouping of stories, I always love Ron and Hermione and through Ginny and Harry in and it's absolutely priceless. Anyway you MUST continue, you haven't written in months!

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