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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Partisan Warfare
Review(s): 14

Reviewer: MariagonerDate: 2004-08-11
Reviewid: 96683Chapter: 1
Wonderful crossover! I didn't think ANYONE would be able to combine two such different universes, but you did it wonderfully. And the relationship between Shiftlet and Ted was amazing-- and the end truly did seem tragic.

Reviewer: elokinDate: 2003-11-15
Reviewid: 60142Chapter: 8
I don't usually like cross-overs, but this one was excellent. You remembered what so many other writers forget: a cross-over is just that, a crossing-over. Characters aren't meant to stay.

Also, excellent Sherrinford. For all intents and purposes he was an original character (J.K. didn't do all that much with him) and I enjoyed how you kept what liitle he had while adding to him.

Also, excellent treatment of Snape (even if it was only a little).

Reviewer: EvDate: 2003-07-08
Reviewid: 40880Chapter: 8
Man, that's good. I really liked the crossover idea, that Breakers are similar to wizards, and that all these worlds are connected. ( I'm writing a story that involves The Dark Tower with the First Evil from Buffy, I figure it's probably a Crimson King minion as well.) Nice original character too, a nice contrast to the innocence of Bobby in Hearts in Atlantis. Your Randall Flagg was spot on too. Sad ending though, in a sort of inevitable way. And the last line was perfect. The first piece of post OOp fanfic I've read, and I think it's going to be hard to beat

Reviewer: shellebelleDate: 2003-06-18
Reviewid: 37558Chapter: 8
What a very interesting story! I felt very badly for poor Sherrinford, but I understand why. Great job! I hope to read more of your stories in future.

Reviewer: shellebelleDate: 2003-06-17
Reviewid: 37291Chapter: 6
AAAAGHHH! Flagg! Great, more nightmare fuel! Sweeney, you are an evil genius. Off to read Chapter 7.

Reviewer: KarieDate: 2003-06-09
Reviewid: 35972Chapter: 6
This is a fascinating story (:

Reviewer: shellebelleDate: 2003-06-03
Reviewid: 35114Chapter: 5
Eeep! Oooh, what happens next?

Hubby recently read "Hearts in Atlantis" and he really liked it. There's another one to add to my booklist. *sigh*

Reviewer: KarieDate: 2003-05-23
Reviewid: 33366Chapter: 4
Great character, Shiftlet (: The story is becoming more interesting every chapter.

Reviewer: shellebelleDate: 2003-05-23
Reviewid: 33364Chapter: 4
Wow. A great chapter, and a wonderful bonding of Shiftlet and Brautigan. You do a great job with atmosphere and mood. I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: KarieDate: 2003-03-14
Reviewid: 23898Chapter: 3
So. The interactions between Ted and Shiftlet are interesting. Nice impression of creepy-crawly-under-the-radar-stuff (: I wonder how much longer until Shiftlet is pulled into everything willy-nilly.

Reviewer: CatherineDate: 2003-03-12
Reviewid: 23768Chapter: 2
Knowing what is to come next, I find this chapter particularly interesting now. Ah! Sherrinford! How his life will change.


Reviewer: shellebelleDate: 2003-03-11
Reviewid: 23566Chapter: 2
Sweeney, how can you do this to me? Now I have to read "The Dark Tower"...ARGH! No, seriously, this is a great start and I can hardly wait to see what comes next!

Reviewer: KarieDate: 2003-03-11
Reviewid: 23558Chapter: 2
Very interesting. I'll be interested to see where you go next.

Reviewer: CatherineDate: 2003-03-07
Reviewid: 23185Chapter: 1
It's interesting to see the differences in this version. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story changes and sharpens.


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