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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: Mariagoner | Date: 2004-08-11 |
| Reviewid: 96683 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wonderful crossover! I didn't think ANYONE would be able to combine two such different universes, but you did it wonderfully. And the relationship between Shiftlet and Ted was amazing-- and the end truly did seem tragic. |
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| Reviewer: elokin | Date: 2003-11-15 |
| Reviewid: 60142 | Chapter: 8 |
I don't usually like cross-overs, but this one was excellent. You remembered what so many other writers forget: a cross-over is just that, a crossing-over. Characters aren't meant to stay.
Also, excellent Sherrinford. For all intents and purposes he was an original character (J.K. didn't do all that much with him) and I enjoyed how you kept what liitle he had while adding to him.
Also, excellent treatment of Snape (even if it was only a little). |
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| Reviewer: Ev | Date: 2003-07-08 |
| Reviewid: 40880 | Chapter: 8 |
| Man, that's good. I really liked the crossover idea, that Breakers are similar to wizards, and that all these worlds are connected. ( I'm writing a story that involves The Dark Tower with the First Evil from Buffy, I figure it's probably a Crimson King minion as well.) Nice original character too, a nice contrast to the innocence of Bobby in Hearts in Atlantis. Your Randall Flagg was spot on too. Sad ending though, in a sort of inevitable way. And the last line was perfect. The first piece of post OOp fanfic I've read, and I think it's going to be hard to beat |
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| Reviewer: shellebelle | Date: 2003-06-18 |
| Reviewid: 37558 | Chapter: 8 |
| What a very interesting story! I felt very badly for poor Sherrinford, but I understand why. Great job! I hope to read more of your stories in future. |
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| Reviewer: shellebelle | Date: 2003-06-17 |
| Reviewid: 37291 | Chapter: 6 |
| AAAAGHHH! Flagg! Great, more nightmare fuel! Sweeney, you are an evil genius. Off to read Chapter 7. |
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| Reviewer: shellebelle | Date: 2003-06-03 |
| Reviewid: 35114 | Chapter: 5 |
Eeep! Oooh, what happens next?
Hubby recently read "Hearts in Atlantis" and he really liked it. There's another one to add to my booklist. *sigh* |
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| Reviewer: shellebelle | Date: 2003-05-23 |
| Reviewid: 33364 | Chapter: 4 |
| Wow. Just...wow. A great chapter, and a wonderful bonding of Shiftlet and Brautigan. You do a great job with atmosphere and mood. I can't wait to read more! |
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| Reviewer: Karie | Date: 2003-03-14 |
| Reviewid: 23898 | Chapter: 3 |
| So. The interactions between Ted and Shiftlet are interesting. Nice impression of creepy-crawly-under-the-radar-stuff (: I wonder how much longer until Shiftlet is pulled into everything willy-nilly. |
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| Reviewer: Catherine | Date: 2003-03-12 |
| Reviewid: 23768 | Chapter: 2 |
Knowing what is to come next, I find this chapter particularly interesting now. Ah! Sherrinford! How his life will change.
Catherine |
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| Reviewer: shellebelle | Date: 2003-03-11 |
| Reviewid: 23566 | Chapter: 2 |
| Sweeney, how can you do this to me? Now I have to read "The Dark Tower"...ARGH! No, seriously, this is a great start and I can hardly wait to see what comes next! |
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| Reviewer: Catherine | Date: 2003-03-07 |
| Reviewid: 23185 | Chapter: 1 |
It's interesting to see the differences in this version. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story changes and sharpens.
Catherine |
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