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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Return
Review(s): 8

Reviewer: reader2Date: 2005-02-24
Reviewid: 114817Chapter: 1
Excellent end

Reviewer: Violet AzureDate: 2004-01-20
Reviewid: 67805Chapter: 1
[his friend and workmate Modwin Banks appeared to have a halo, one he definitely did not deserve.] Great phrasing. I love the image and the humor.

["My God," she whispered, "they're so beautiful." And then the Welsh Green set a tree on fire.] Nice comic timing there.

You do an excellent job developing Charlie's character. You really have a sense of what he's like. I liked the name for his owl, that was a good touch.

The romance developing between Charlie and Ingrid was very well done. There's a hint of awkwardness and ease around each other. You can see that they get along and have a connection, but there's a maturity to their budding relationship that one would expect from people their age. Your characters are very well developed and I really feel that they could be real people instead of fabrications. Nice job!

Reviewer: BeakerDate: 2003-08-27
Reviewid: 48934Chapter: 1
You do have a knack for letting characters tell their own stories, in dialogue and thought, even while they do their own character development. Nice show again! I like how Charlie acts on his idea immediately at the end there--it's not impulsiveness, it's knowing what to do and being able to do it instantly, without second-guessing himself. It's a great quality for working with dragons--or with dragon handlers!

Reviewer: ShlozDate: 2003-08-27
Reviewid: 48921Chapter: 1
Cute. The 'pining for the fjords' was a great bit of homage.

Reviewer: ivy & GracieDate: 2003-07-19
Reviewid: 42791Chapter: 1
you're a one, eurydice, you really are. ("i know," eurydice responded). this is such a great little story! you have a knack for credible dialogue, and you keep the pace moving. you've also covered a number of topics (charlie's years at hogwarts, his history w. modwin, his r'ship w. ingrid, harry's place in the weasley family, norbert, ingrid's history in roem, dragon "facts"...) in a short space, in a believeable way. three cheers for eurydice!

Reviewer: AJLeeDate: 2003-03-14
Reviewid: 23983Chapter: 1
"Pining for the fjords"? Oh, you Monty Python fans are everywhere!

Reviewer: AlixDate: 2003-03-11
Reviewid: 23571Chapter: 1
great follow up...loved it :) charlie's adorable :p

Reviewer: LourdesDate: 2003-03-11
Reviewid: 23563Chapter: 1
Brilliant! Well done.

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