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Review(s): 8
| Reviewer: Amanda | Date: 2004-01-24 |
| Reviewid: 68313 | Chapter: 1 |
| I could see it happening.. Ron letting it slip to Moody!Crouch and that's why he suggested Accio!Firebolt. Interesting look at things. Thank god the boys made up! |
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| Reviewer: FernWithy | Date: 2003-06-13 |
| Reviewid: 36504 | Chapter: 1 |
| Good thinking! Sure... keep Ron involved in the story even when he's determined not to be. :) |
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| Reviewer: Katinka | Date: 2003-04-19 |
| Reviewid: 28631 | Chapter: 1 |
Ah! I like your take on this situation, and the fact that RON was the one to unintentionally inspire Crouch/Moody. It makes Ron seem that much smarter and him that much less so.
Great job on the sibling interaction, and I think you really captured Ron's uncertainty about his place in the world, especially in lines like this:
<<“He did? How—never mind. Should’ve known he’d have known. He always does.”>>
~Katinka, who now wants to go find Ron and give him a hug |
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| Reviewer: zsenya | Date: 2003-04-18 |
| Reviewid: 28438 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is zsenya apologizing to alphabet. There were two versions of this story posted on the Sugar Quill. Alphabet asked us to delete one, and I accidentally deleted the one that had all the reviews. So, let it be known that on April 17, 2003, alphabet had 15 reviews for this story... so, SO sorry. ~Zsenya |
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| Reviewer: Fawkes101 | Date: 2003-04-17 |
| Reviewid: 28230 | Chapter: 1 |
| Awesome story. Very in character... I loved Ron's reactions. They were perfect... so were Ginny's. :) |
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