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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 57

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-02-24
Reviewid: 140221Chapter: 1
Quite Nice
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Reviewer: 1SadFoolDate: 2006-01-13
Reviewid: 138447Chapter: 1
The whole thing was a real kick. I really enjoyed it! But, the best part, not to go against your excellent skills in story writing, but it was the AN:
And for the record, Malfoy ends up saying something like, "Mofbloodkindashibugowwww!"
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Reviewer: AmandaDate: 2005-09-07
Reviewid: 131876Chapter: 1
This is a really good, and amusing story :-D
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Reviewer: Genne-veraDate: 2005-09-05
Reviewid: 131769Chapter: 1
"Mofbloodkindashibugowwww!" MY NEW MSN NAME!!!!
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Reviewer: AccentDate: 2005-07-19
Reviewid: 127403Chapter: 1
Ha ha!very funny:P
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Reviewer: TrueDate: 2005-07-04
Reviewid: 126062Chapter: 1
I love the ending!
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Reviewer: AnaxandraDate: 2005-06-27
Reviewid: 125387Chapter: 1
Dam good writing. you supremely rock. i love the view of Draco as a normal asshole, not evil. Draco's still a pretty boy in my eyes, though. Again, keep writing, we all love you. WOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
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Reviewer: AmiDate: 2005-06-21
Reviewid: 124764Chapter: 1
xD an drco hermione i can acctrully beleive
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Reviewer: mother gooseDate: 2005-05-04
Reviewid: 121365Chapter: 1
hehehe a great story idea, I've never met one of your stories I didn't like :)
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Reviewer: DanielleDate: 2005-03-11
Reviewid: 116210Chapter: 1
Maybe I'm being thick/naive/too innocent/all three but I really can't translate the Malfoy comment at the end. That aside its good, not as funny as some as your others but still enjoyable.
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Reviewer: ButterfliesDate: 2005-01-06
Reviewid: 109947Chapter: 1
Thank goodness for that. I thought Draco was about to confess his undying love!
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Reviewer: BogglemindFGDate: 2004-12-02
Reviewid: 106642Chapter: 1
That was, yet again, hilarious. I love your writing style. SO FUNNY!!!!!
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Reviewer: acerbusdraconisDate: 2004-12-01
Reviewid: 106601Chapter: 1
wat the hell was that about aw nuts that was a sucky ending fer godsakes why didn't they like do SOMETHING awewell. u write god but the ending whyyyyyyy... : (
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Reviewer: KarriDate: 2004-11-09
Reviewid: 103975Chapter: 1
LMAO!! That was soooo funny!!!! U are posably my fav writer on here! I love it!
Keep it up
KArri
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Reviewer: angelina weasleyDate: 2004-10-27
Reviewid: 102718Chapter: 1
hi!!! it's me again. just want to say hi and i lurve the use of your l33t.
hope someone spays you. heh.
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Reviewer: Mei ChangDate: 2004-07-12
Reviewid: 92003Chapter: 1
*punches air* YES I feel the victory!!!!!!! If any of you feel that Malfoy didn't deserve it, I'm sorry to say, but you've been cursed with a good heart.
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Reviewer: LizzyDate: 2004-06-27
Reviewid: 89110Chapter: 1
brilliant ending!
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Reviewer: MonikaDate: 2004-06-15
Reviewid: 87172Chapter: 1
And for a moment there I thought you were going for a hr/d ship :)
This was very well done. Very in character. Funny how Hermoine can't think of the right spell when she's under a lot of pressure, like in the Sorcerer's Stone. (But there's no wood!) Yet Draco kept his cool the whole time :) and also I liked the interesting insight into the Malfoy family.
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Reviewer: angelina weasleyDate: 2004-06-12
Reviewid: 86896Chapter: 1
yay!!! you s|>34|< l337!!! have you read megatokoyo. i7 r0x. good story. better l33t.
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Reviewer: ...Date: 2004-06-08
Reviewid: 86351Chapter: 1
A brilliant ending!
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Reviewer: $~#Glowing * Toadstool#~$Date: 2004-05-23
Reviewid: 84120Chapter: 1
Stupid Hermione. :P Draco is one of my most favorite characters because he's such a jerk. I'm sure to most people that makes no sense but oh well. :O
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Reviewer: CornedBeeDate: 2004-05-22
Reviewid: 84071Chapter: 1
That cold lump of anger at you that built up during the story for making Hermione look stupid unloaded itself in a muffled cry of "Yes!" (because I must not wake my family) when I read that last line. You do have a talent for that, you know...
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Reviewer: big daveDate: 2004-03-14
Reviewid: 74571Chapter: 1
another great short but sweet story from the creator of "The Afterlife and Times of Professor Binns, Historian of Magic"
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Reviewer: story645Date: 2004-01-21
Reviewid: 67889Chapter: 1
very funny, great job keeping them in character
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Reviewer: Phoenix BlackDate: 2003-12-29
Reviewid: 65119Chapter: 1
*HOWLS WITH LAUGHTER*
Go HERMIONE!!!
This is a great story!!! Maybe Ron and Hermione should get trapped in another room together? Or maybe the same room, and Hermy just doesn't remember which spell it was that Draco used?
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Reviewer: GeorgiaDate: 2003-12-23
Reviewid: 64536Chapter: 1
If Only there was a sequel.... *COUGHCOUGH* Sorry, i think there is something in my throat *COUGHCOUGH* :)
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Reviewer: Talking Purple RabbitsDate: 2003-12-18
Reviewid: 63903Chapter: 1
heheheheheheheheheh..........

:)

Very good. Not quite as funny as some of your others, but still absolutely brilliant, none the less.

~TPR
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Reviewer: WhiteWolfDate: 2003-12-17
Reviewid: 63830Chapter: 1
I love it! I really wish I had something witty and productive to say, but I am still in awe of your ability and so can't find the words. I am a huge fan.
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Reviewer: mattyDate: 2003-11-15
Reviewid: 60054Chapter: 1
very nice ending...
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Reviewer: zakDate: 2003-10-28
Reviewid: 58151Chapter: 1
Loved it! Draco is SUCH a nasty little bugger, isn't he?
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Reviewer: HeatherKDate: 2003-10-02
Reviewid: 55181Chapter: 1
ROFLMAO!!!!! OH GOODNESS!!! That's priceless!!! I love it! It's just about right!! Oh goodness I can't breathe!! ROFL some more!!!! HAAAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
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Reviewer: Myster webDate: 2003-10-02
Reviewid: 55089Chapter: 1
Cute! Draco got what he deserves! Please keep on writing!
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Reviewer: Waywren TruesongDate: 2003-09-04
Reviewid: 50758Chapter: 1
.........'dies laughing' isn't big enough. ^^
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Reviewer: cel blackDate: 2003-09-02
Reviewid: 50382Chapter: 1
"Mofbloodkindashibugowwww!"
classic, that
aaahhhhh the good ol knee in the groin
kudos, mione
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Reviewer: IceDate: 2003-09-01
Reviewid: 49953Chapter: 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA

ha.
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Reviewer: DidieDate: 2003-08-29
Reviewid: 49252Chapter: 1
LOL!! that was hilarious
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Reviewer: CorvidaeDate: 2003-08-28
Reviewid: 49065Chapter: 1
love love love you
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Reviewer: BrytniDate: 2003-08-28
Reviewid: 49001Chapter: 1
wonderful!!! definately one of the best draco stories on the quill. thank you so much for not making this a d/h story because then i'd have to slit your throat. jk. keep writing!
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Reviewer: RehanDate: 2003-08-27
Reviewid: 48908Chapter: 1
Oh man! What a classic ending! For a moment there I thought you were going to expose yourself as a closet Leather and Libraries (D/H)shipper! Thank goodness you didn't.

Now, the only thing left is for me to wonder if Draco's reluctance to be anyone's slave is enough to make him fight on Dumbledore's side...interesting.....
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Reviewer: JamieDate: 2003-08-26
Reviewid: 48857Chapter: 1
funny and Bloody Brilliant!
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Reviewer: Olivia PitcherDate: 2003-08-26
Reviewid: 48825Chapter: 1
hahahahahahahahahaha.
aaahahahahahahahahahahahaha.

That is all.
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Reviewer: AnjerlaDate: 2003-08-26
Reviewid: 48686Chapter: 1
*weird demented laughter*

Heh. Heh. Ehe. Heh.

...and that's really all I have to say about that.
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Reviewer: julesDate: 2003-08-26
Reviewid: 48672Chapter: 1
hahahahahahahahaha, no more than he deserved!
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Reviewer: dragontacDate: 2003-08-02
Reviewid: 45069Chapter: 1
lol. stupid malfoy. i wish she cursed him though. cursed him so he could never have children. that would have been ironic.
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Reviewer: EmilyAnnaDate: 2003-07-20
Reviewid: 43052Chapter: 1
Malfoy seems a little OOC, but still hilarious overall. Great read. Love the last line. :)
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Reviewer: VeldDate: 2003-07-16
Reviewid: 42256Chapter: 1
Odd and interesting at the same time.
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Reviewer: ElliottDate: 2003-07-16
Reviewid: 42244Chapter: 1
SQUIIISH! And now, a moment of silence, please, for Draco Malfoy.

Git.

Good job. Nice pacing, nice way of making Draco detestable while explaining why he isn't evil. And I paraphrase the Tough Guide to Harry Potter: "Anyone you kick on your tour will deserve it."
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Reviewer: Nicole (YuguriTenshi)Date: 2003-07-01
Reviewid: 39283Chapter: 1
Very good!
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Reviewer: googligooDate: 2003-06-30
Reviewid: 39057Chapter: 1
for some crazy reason, this fic actually makes me think d/h actually exists. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![oh, by the way, this was a great fic`.^]

googligoo
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Reviewer: Carmen SandiegoDate: 2003-06-20
Reviewid: 37863Chapter: 1
lol! All I can do is laugh, especially the whole "more Weasleys" bit at the end! lol!
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Reviewer: Care BareDate: 2003-06-04
Reviewid: 35319Chapter: 1
oh my! that was loveley!!!! briliant dialogue and very 'in-character' characters!!! Simply awsome--you must write more!
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Reviewer: Ara KaneDate: 2003-06-03
Reviewid: 35162Chapter: 1
LOL! That's all I can say, really -- LOL. I'm sure Draco meant what he said about Voldemort and his father, but to NOT make this a D/H friendship fic was brilliant.
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Reviewer: KristinaDate: 2003-06-03
Reviewid: 35094Chapter: 1
Luv it! LOL!
In pain, Draco fell to the ground, a thousand curses battling for supremacy on his lips.

hahahahaha!

Malfoy bashing! Yeah! o_O

YES! LOVED IT!
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Reviewer: Jill W.Date: 2003-06-01
Reviewid: 34875Chapter: 1
Beautiful, just beautiful. A situation where Hermione and Malfoy come to an understanding... that they still hate each other. This is definitely a classic.
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Reviewer: Jessica V.Date: 2003-06-01
Reviewid: 34871Chapter: 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS IS HILARIOUS!!! hahahahahahhaa...it's to funnt to describe...nice work!!!
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Reviewer: TalynDate: 2003-06-01
Reviewid: 34821Chapter: 1
"I am Draco Malfoy," he said, as if that explained everything. "I will be no one’s slave, regardless of what I might gain from it."

That is absolutely PERFECT - 100% Slytherin talking, right there. Indeed, I wish you hadn't written it, because now I'll have to cite you when I use that quote in my own story. What a great little vignette!
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Reviewer: DezraeDate: 2003-06-01
Reviewid: 34798Chapter: 1
LOL! There were some very funny parts! I could not stop laughing! I've always loved D/H stories and this one starts off really well! I can't wait for another installment of this!
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