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Reviews for: Lay My Head Down
Review(s): 63

Reviewer: MuggleForMagicDate: 2007-09-19
Reviewid: 149339Chapter: 1
One word "AWWWWWWWWW"
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Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-03-25
Reviewid: 141294Chapter: 1
Nice
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Reviewer: emilyDate: 2005-06-11
Reviewid: 123705Chapter: 1
that was soo beautiful. i was praticly crying when i read that. <sobs>
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Reviewer: DanielleDate: 2005-04-05
Reviewid: 118784Chapter: 1
Hey Cuz. Thought I would check out some of your stories. I am singing this at my choir concert! It's really a great song. You're a great writer! Keep it up! Love ya!
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Reviewer: NoraDate: 2005-03-11
Reviewid: 116105Chapter: 1
sappy beyond belief but I love it. R/Hness peeps rule the universe.
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Reviewer: SweetMidnyteKissDate: 2005-01-03
Reviewid: 109589Chapter: 1
awww...that is soo cute! wish something like that would happen to me! ^^ good song to go with it too.
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Reviewer: meDate: 2004-08-13
Reviewid: 97153Chapter: 1
awww.cute...wonderfully written
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Reviewer: RossyDate: 2004-07-19
Reviewid: 93193Chapter: 1
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww, brilliant, lovely !!

I would like that this in book 6 or 7.
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Reviewer: sweetieDate: 2004-06-25
Reviewid: 88839Chapter: 1
Anione, you are a goddess! this is so beautiful and i love this song! you really nailed Ron and Hermione's love/hate relationship. They are SO made for eachother!

R/H forever!

luv sweetie
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Reviewer: VickiDate: 2004-06-20
Reviewid: 87999Chapter: 1
God, all of your stuff is just briliiant...
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Reviewer: What's Y'all up 2??Date: 2004-04-14
Reviewid: 78726Chapter: 1
Hey Anoine !! i just wanted 2 say that I LOVE ALL of you r stories expessially (sp?)
Starcross'd !! This was no exception !! It was so totally real and
It was just plain enjoyable!! I hope Ron will stop being so stubborn and ask Hermione out in
the canon bcuz I no that they will end up 2gether, (sorri to anyone who is a H/H shipper )
N e ways I also wanted to say that you write kind of a prequel ( I dunno what u call it)
about Starcross'd !! Write about How Draco and Grace fell in Love!! Please!

Your # 1 FAN,
What's Y'all up 2?
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Reviewer: ChrisDate: 2004-04-06
Reviewid: 77399Chapter: 1
Just to let you know, "Only Hope" is by Switchfoot, Mandy Moore just covered it for the "A Walk to Remember" soundtrack.
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Reviewer: Emma GraceDate: 2004-02-27
Reviewid: 72398Chapter: 1
Cute. Fluffy, but you warned me. A little too fluffy.

Mainly in character, but I don't know that Ron would cry.

All in all, great job!
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Reviewer: all agogDate: 2004-02-06
Reviewid: 69715Chapter: 1
this is whatI call R/H ,compared to some pathetic atempts at fluff this is too good to be trie. And this comes from me afan of any thing to do with romance .p.s u should write for the archies
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Reviewer: all agogDate: 2004-02-06
Reviewid: 69714Chapter: 1
i've searched the entire earth for anever dying collection of romance and my quest ends here. this site is totally my thing .fluff,romance ,gossip you name it u find the fic. i'm impressed!(do ya write h/g)
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Reviewer: wertDate: 2004-02-06
Reviewid: 69713Chapter: 1
OH my gawd you writers really know your biz !this quality R/H fluff is rare so get working an' gimme MORE
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Reviewer: JoannaDate: 2004-01-09
Reviewid: 66381Chapter: 1
Aww! I love it! That was really R/H at it's finest! It was perfect. Yay! I loved it.

~Joanna
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Reviewer: JessDate: 2004-01-08
Reviewid: 66157Chapter: 1
WEEEEE! So fluffy! I love it! ::huggles story::
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Reviewer: rachel meltzerDate: 2003-12-30
Reviewid: 65232Chapter: 1
wow. this is awsome
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Reviewer: Angel StreetDate: 2003-12-18
Reviewid: 63948Chapter: 1
That was beautiful. True to the heart. Just pure bliss.
Well done. I love it.
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Reviewer: GeorgiaDate: 2003-12-18
Reviewid: 63858Chapter: 1
and i thought that i was the only one that was in love with this song! I saw the title, and thought, nah, couldn't be. Guess you could say that in this case, curiosity was a fantastic thing to give into! Fantasic fic, i could taste their frustration! keep writting!
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Reviewer: DavalynDate: 2003-11-14
Reviewid: 59982Chapter: 1
That was beautifull written. I loved it!
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Reviewer: lineDate: 2003-09-12
Reviewid: 52062Chapter: 1
awww .. so romantic.. :)
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Reviewer: cel blackDate: 2003-09-02
Reviewid: 50153Chapter: 1
oh man.
another of my FAV songs
and aGAIN, its SO fitting here
and, again, i was a dork and listened to it while reading.
i do that with EVERY songfic, boy im an idiot.
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Reviewer: emmiDate: 2003-08-30
Reviewid: 49393Chapter: 1
Ohmigod! so cute, so romantic( especially last line) luv it!
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Reviewer: MimiDate: 2003-08-24
Reviewid: 48462Chapter: 1
Awww! Cutest ficcy ever. I love those guys. *sniff*
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Reviewer: EmmaDate: 2003-08-22
Reviewid: 48233Chapter: 1
Ron and Hermione; as if!
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Reviewer: EmmaDate: 2003-08-22
Reviewid: 48232Chapter: 1
Hermione and Ron is NOT going to happen! This is a waste writing!
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Reviewer: CourtneyDate: 2003-08-15
Reviewid: 47278Chapter: 1
Lovely story! Fluffiness, and more fluffiness. Lol. It was very well written, and nice song choice. (Of course I would say that even if the song didn't fit the story because I love that song so much), but they do fit. Keep writing.
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Reviewer: MaskDate: 2003-08-11
Reviewid: 46594Chapter: 1
Excellent, I love all R/H ship stories and this was well written and fun to read. Thankyou for the voyage :0)
Mask
The Avid R/H shipper!
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Reviewer: dragontacDate: 2003-08-10
Reviewid: 46505Chapter: 1
awww that was a good one. i don't even like the song and i still thought it was good.
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Reviewer: MaggieDate: 2003-08-09
Reviewid: 46298Chapter: 1
I liked this! Wow, it seems like everyone thinks Ron and Hermione will end up together!! I liked how it was writed..taking both of their perspectives. Great Job! :)

*Lily
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Reviewer: PickleDate: 2003-08-06
Reviewid: 45888Chapter: 1
*giggles* yay!
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Reviewer: SamanthaDate: 2003-08-04
Reviewid: 45439Chapter: 1
aww, I liked that!
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Reviewer: Angiesphinx!Date: 2003-08-03
Reviewid: 45192Chapter: 1
ooooohhhhh!!! that's really nice!!
good song ot the back!!! i hevn't hesrd it but it's lyric is just beautiful!
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Reviewer: Ron's g-friendDate: 2003-08-02
Reviewid: 45128Chapter: 1
The very last sentance was sooooo romantic! :-)
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Reviewer: kellDate: 2003-08-02
Reviewid: 45064Chapter: 1
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SO SWEET love it to bits
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Reviewer: JessicaDate: 2003-08-02
Reviewid: 45055Chapter: 1
omg, i could feel my own eyes misting...i think i am going to cry. i don't care if ne1 says this is corny, but i believe it is THE ONLY way it should be! u r truly talented, ron and hermione r MADE FOR EACH OTHER and u captured that so perfectly. i loved how u incorporated the song lyrics, i love that song, i listen to it all the time and sing along and pending on my mood it always soothes me. this is a very beautiful fanfic and now im gonna go read ure other ones :)
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Reviewer: TamaraDate: 2003-08-01
Reviewid: 45000Chapter: 1
Wow...that was so good. It's so nice when they end so well.
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Reviewer: Raquel Duarte SouzaDate: 2003-08-01
Reviewid: 44997Chapter: 1
What a cute fic!!! I loved it! Very charming and well written. Congratulations on a work well done!
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Reviewer: CaitieDate: 2003-07-30
Reviewid: 44671Chapter: 1
I LOVE THAT SONG TO!A Walk To Remember is my favorite movie of all time!!Good Story!
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Reviewer: ct_lytsDate: 2003-07-30
Reviewid: 44643Chapter: 1
That was wonderful. Great writing.
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Reviewer: lovesprungfromhateDate: 2003-07-30
Reviewid: 44630Chapter: 1
That was truly gorgeous.
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Reviewer: SheridanDate: 2003-07-24
Reviewid: 43731Chapter: 1
i totally love this story!!! you are completely gifted!
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Reviewer: trickDate: 2003-07-20
Reviewid: 43081Chapter: 1
AWE! this story is sweet. very well written. only thing i have to say is that the song "Only Hope" is actually by Switchfoot. mandy just covered it in the movie.
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Reviewer: Timothy TDate: 2003-07-20
Reviewid: 43064Chapter: 1
To Anione Graton,
Please Keep writing, Your short Fan Fic
Lay My Head Down needs more. You need to
let Ron and Hermione Finish, Don't leave
them out to dry.
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Reviewer: RoryDate: 2003-07-18
Reviewid: 42582Chapter: 1
That was really good!
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Reviewer: Paige Knorr (The Muggle Hermione)Date: 2003-07-17
Reviewid: 42492Chapter: 1
Dear Author,
This was a really good story. You have a nice bit of songfic, a bit of fluffiness, some angst, but it all turns out for the best in the end. Ron blurting out 'I love you' was VERY Ron-ish. Great job.

From,
Paige Knorr
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Reviewer: Miss_Hermione_GrangerDate: 2003-07-16
Reviewid: 42368Chapter: 1
Awwwwww, Tear jerker!
I love it!
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Reviewer: Fawkes101Date: 2003-07-16
Reviewid: 42346Chapter: 1
Brilliant! Fluffy, but realistic. I like how you went into each of their minds, great transition there. Very in character!
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Reviewer: JulietDate: 2003-07-16
Reviewid: 42318Chapter: 1
I love you!!! (eh, that sounds scary...but nontheless ...) I have just finished reading all of your stories, and I have to say they are "Bloody brilliant." I have a hard time reading stories written Pre-OOtP, but these manage to read well, even after the 5th book's new information. I hope you write more-especially all these nice Ron/Hermione fictions. :)
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Reviewer: MeghanDate: 2003-07-15
Reviewid: 42208Chapter: 1
Awww! Sweetness. Fluffety fluffers fluff fluffen fluff.

PoV changes...ehh...oh, well. It's well written, so PoV changes I can tolerate. It's fluffy plotless, that I can tolerate as well. In fact, that's mostly what I read, so I can do more than TOLERATE it, if you know...

Good story, anyway, it ROX!

Thanx,
Meghan
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Reviewer: Aisling and RyreDate: 2003-07-15
Reviewid: 42165Chapter: 1
Oh well someones allready done the "aaawwww" thing...well it deserves two. Its so fluffy and well writen. Sequel please?
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Reviewer: Aisling and RyreDate: 2003-07-15
Reviewid: 42164Chapter: 1
All together now! one, two, three....AAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! YAY FOR R/H!!!!!!
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Reviewer: Hryptrfn89Date: 2003-07-13
Reviewid: 41706Chapter: 1
That was so sweet!!! I loved how you changed the p.o.v all the time it was very refreshing. Well, keep on writin'!!!~Hryptrfn89
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Reviewer: zvjezzDate: 2003-07-12
Reviewid: 41655Chapter: 1
Wonderfully writen! A piece of poetry...and that song is lovely. Ever since I watched "A Walk to Remember" I have loved that melody and it truly fits in with this story. Please keep it up!
zvjezz
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Reviewer: SkippyDate: 2003-07-12
Reviewid: 41623Chapter: 1
1...2...3... AAAWWWWW!!!Darling, simply darling... I LOVED IT!!! I love R/H fics. Is there ANY other ship? Any?

-Skippy
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Reviewer: kayjalDate: 2003-07-12
Reviewid: 41579Chapter: 1
nice one. sweet.
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Reviewer: Julia PotterDate: 2003-07-12
Reviewid: 41573Chapter: 1
test
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Reviewer: SallyDate: 2003-07-12
Reviewid: 41571Chapter: 1
Whee! Lovely, lovely fluffness. I liked very much. Very very good.

Just one thing. No, I'm not criticizing. >< I hope you don't take it that way.

The song Only Hope is actually by a Christian group named Switchfoot. They did a lot of the songs in A Walk To Remember. Mandy Moore does a really good version of the song, but I recently got to see Switchfoot in concert, and I have to say I like theirs better. You should check it out sometime.

Again, no criticism. Just a fact. x.x Keep writing, I love your stuff.
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Reviewer: KirkisDate: 2003-07-12
Reviewid: 41565Chapter: 1
Wai! That was great, and I don't like Songfics and it was great!! Rushing off to read the rest of your Fanfiction! Wai!

Kirkis
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Reviewer: Newbia the ElfDate: 2003-07-12
Reviewid: 41560Chapter: 1
Glad too see another story from the Queen of R/H Fluffiness. It's up to your usual fluff standards,don't worry :)
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Reviewer: JacieDate: 2003-07-12
Reviewid: 41559Chapter: 1
That was truely "light and fluffy" And I say needed after reading #5. This song sung by Mandy Moore is one of my favs as well, and I have to say you did a really good job working the song and the story together.
Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next!
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