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Review(s): 14
| Reviewer: katie Bilius | Date: 2006-02-07 |
| Reviewid: 139474 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow, nice story! I love it when people write about the secondary characters and unique stories that get you thinking "hmmm... I wonder if that did happen..." instead of just stories about Ron, Harry, or Hermione (even though some of them are good) all of the time with a boring plot. Keep up the excellent work! |
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| Reviewer: Sheila | Date: 2003-11-18 |
| Reviewid: 60518 | Chapter: 1 |
i really liked it. god, i can't believe that person reviewed this as a piece of crap! i really liked it!
-Sheila |
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| Reviewer: Fawkes101 | Date: 2003-11-15 |
| Reviewid: 60066 | Chapter: 1 |
Tara- Thanks!
Margaret- It was abrubt wasn't it? Well I'm glad you liked it anyway.
Sammi- Happy you liked the idea.
Meghan- everyone has their own opinion |
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| Reviewer: Samm Weasley | Date: 2003-09-21 |
| Reviewid: 53813 | Chapter: 1 |
| Hmmmmm... Little short but I do like the bases of it. It is pretty well written and I'm glad you used one of the lesser lesser characters. Keep on going I'm impressed. |
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| Reviewer: Margaret B. | Date: 2003-09-02 |
| Reviewid: 50272 | Chapter: 1 |
Wow, really great, I love Ari! But if you don't mind a little constructive critisism, I thought it was a bit sudden when all of a sudden it was a couple years or so later and he was keeper, and then a couple years after THAT, when they won the cup. Because the first part was really long and detailed and these were just a few sentences. I like the ending though....nice last sentence!
~Margaret |
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| Reviewer: Tara (n) | Date: 2003-08-20 |
| Reviewid: 48023 | Chapter: 1 |
Peanut Butter! I LIVE FOR OLLIE!!! ps. thats my name for him! Great story... any more chappies coming? Keep Writing!
Love Ya, NP
xoxo |
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| Reviewer: Fawkes101 | Date: 2003-07-22 |
| Reviewid: 43374 | Chapter: 1 |
Lenitie-I like this story. It's pretty cool. I'm thinking that when Oliver said," Ari, if you could only see me now. I won the Quidditch Cup!", it meant that Ari had died? Please tell me.
No Ari hasn't died... Oliver just wants her to be there, watching him. She is somewhere else, unspecified. Glad you liked it!
Thanks for reviewing everyone! |
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| Reviewer: Lenitie | Date: 2003-07-22 |
| Reviewid: 43313 | Chapter: 1 |
| I like this story. It's pretty cool. I'm thinking that when Oliver said," Ari, if you could only see me now. I won the Quidditch Cup!", it meant that Ari had died? Please tell me. |
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