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Review(s): 21
| Reviewer: Sana Jon | Date: 2005-06-02 |
| Reviewid: 123193 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very cute. A rather clever way of letting us know what happened in the future for everybody in the wizarding world. :) The chess game idea was a very good, not to mention useful one. You fit the commanded moves of these two into the conversation quite nicely. ;) Interesting, but also lovely, how it's almost all conversation. I really like that a lot. :D |
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| Reviewer: story645 | Date: 2004-01-19 |
| Reviewid: 67735 | Chapter: 1 |
| this is the second time i'm reading this, it's such a sweet fic, makes me feel warm and mushy |
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| Reviewer: Fawkes101 | Date: 2003-12-20 |
| Reviewid: 64072 | Chapter: 1 |
| Sehila- Thanks and I'm glad you liked it! And I will try to write more fics with R/Hr. |
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| Reviewer: Sehila | Date: 2003-12-02 |
| Reviewid: 61587 | Chapter: 1 |
this is the last time i review this, i promise. its just that i wanted to say that i used to review under the name Sheila Plickney, then i shortened it to Sheila. then i saw that when i typed it too fast it turned out Sehila, thus my new name.besides, i like it! by the way i still really luv this fic. ok bye!
-Sehila |
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| Reviewer: Sehila | Date: 2003-12-02 |
| Reviewid: 61586 | Chapter: 1 |
| i really luv this. (i might have reviewed this before, i dunno.) i luv all the fics about the trio and ginny and everybody when they are all grown up and out of hogwarts. will u write more r/h fluffy stuff??? pleeeez???? |
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| Reviewer: Arnel | Date: 2003-09-29 |
| Reviewid: 54727 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a fun story to read. It was a little confusing in the beginning until I figured out what the relationship between Zoe and Ron was. I like that Ron is a good influence on his nieces. You did a nice job in keeping him true to canon. |
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| Reviewer: Fawkes101 | Date: 2003-09-21 |
| Reviewid: 53855 | Chapter: 1 |
| jessica- the moves were random.. it's hard to make a real chess game. Glad you liked it! |
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| Reviewer: jessica | Date: 2003-09-21 |
| Reviewid: 53775 | Chapter: 1 |
| Aww, cute-ness! I like how you took advantage of by using the dialogue to tell the story. I also loved how you incorporated so many other characters into it! Haha, did you really play out a chess game and write down the moves as the story progressed? Or are they random moves? Very nice story! |
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| Reviewer: Pierre | Date: 2003-09-03 |
| Reviewid: 50577 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow! That was great... although i think that you used to much dialouge anyway i thought ron and hermione were going to get married... (so obvious :-) |
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| Reviewer: mmary | Date: 2003-09-03 |
| Reviewid: 50484 | Chapter: 1 |
| awww....What a cutie. I like it lots. It must've been hard to get all the chess moves into your conversations! |
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| Reviewer: Vi | Date: 2003-09-02 |
| Reviewid: 50281 | Chapter: 1 |
| hmmm. I thought it was creative. I liked the part about Fleur teaching DADA and Neville teaching herbology. Not much about Harry though. |
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| Reviewer: Fawkes101 | Date: 2003-07-22 |
| Reviewid: 43376 | Chapter: 1 |
| xony- well, Harry isn't part of this story. He isn't dead however. :) Glad you enjoyed it! |
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| Reviewer: Portia | Date: 2003-07-22 |
| Reviewid: 43271 | Chapter: 1 |
| I really, really liked this. Ron would be such a cool uncle to have. Zoe is a very Weasley-ish name, and Ron would totally play chess with all of the little Weasleys :). |
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