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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: Luminous MarbleDate: 2003-09-16
Reviewid: 52939Chapter: 1
Eep. Wrong button. Anyway, I meant to say that the combination of Aragog and Snape was an interesting one, and apparently they are well-matched, because Severus' fear disappears. I like the characterization of Aragog as a diviner. I wonder if the forest creatures don't have untapped powers...not that I'd get too close to your extra-scary Aragog to find out! Good work.

Reviewer: Luminous MarbleDate: 2003-09-16
Reviewid: 52938Chapter: 1
Yay! Aragog stories!

Reviewer: ileneDate: 2003-09-15
Reviewid: 52714Chapter: 1
Just got started on going through all the FF contest entries, and I wanted to say, this is a very believable sixteen-year-old Snape. :) At first I wondered why Aragog only mentioned the three Animagi and not Remus-as-werewolf, but since it seems werewolves do appear in the Forest from time to time, perhaps to Aragog it's not a big deal to see a werewolf. I cringed when he did the Avada Kedavra and threatened Aragog's children, but I think that fits Snape very well. I suppose part of his Killing Curse practice included zapping flies in his room? Nice one-shot!

Reviewer: BeakerDate: 2003-09-01
Reviewid: 49878Chapter: 1
Nice Snape! Well, not NICE, but you know what I mean...believeable character and motivations, and yes, he probably IS (and was even as a student) quite powerful. We don't get to see his power as a wizard much, mostly his intimidating, unpleasant personality. But a wizard who gives Aragog pause is someone Voldemort would indeed want to recruit. Nice little story!

Reviewer: JiminyCDate: 2003-08-31
Reviewid: 49823Chapter: 1
Well written! Good characterization of Snape.

Reviewer: GwendolynDate: 2003-08-31
Reviewid: 49624Chapter: 1
I'm your first reviewer! :) You're on the QUILL!!!! Congrats! I love your story! You have pre-death eater Snape done so well. And Aragog is just evil. Great job!

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