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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 2

Reviewer: Luminous MarbleDate: 2003-09-18
Reviewid: 53299Chapter: 1
I liked the quick pace you kept here, as well as the interplay between Harry, Hermione, and Ron--humor in the adventure keeps the tension from being overwhelming.

I'm curious, though, about what comes after this story ends. Harry will have a lot to deal with at this point; could he destroy the boggart given that he would have to destroy himself to do so? And what does it say about how he feels about himself? (Can you tell I'm hoping this is the prologue to a longer story?) :)
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Reviewer: JulieDate: 2003-09-10
Reviewid: 51724Chapter: 1
Cool. I do believe that Harry's greatest fear is different now that it used to be. This is a twist I hadn't thought of, though. Keep up the good work!
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