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| Reviewer: wilania | Date: 2004-02-02 |
| Reviewid: 69281 | Chapter: 1 |
| Wow. Very sinister. Chillingly well-written. Thank you for another interpretation of Ginny's encounters with Tom Riddle. |
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| Reviewer: Not tellin! | Date: 2004-02-01 |
| Reviewid: 69218 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love it and look forward to your other writings. It was very discriptive. And showed how Tom could presude the weak minded. |
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| Reviewer: Beaker | Date: 2003-09-07 |
| Reviewid: 51246 | Chapter: 1 |
Nicely done! I particularly like how Ginny sounds her age. We know Ginny better as a 14-year-old than as an 11-year-old, thanks to all the dialogue in OotP. But this is clearly a child speaking--or rather, thinking. She's still young enough to trust others in spite of the evidence, to give in to the voices of authority even against her better judgement. (Harry doesn't do that at age 11, but then Harry didn't have a family he could trust in the first place.)
Well done! Thanks for a good read. |
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| Reviewer: Darwin's Apprentice | Date: 2003-09-06 |
| Reviewid: 50947 | Chapter: 1 |
| Well done. This is very sinister. You did a nice job of showing Ginny being pulled into Riddle's scheme. His lies and manipulations are well written, too. I liked this. |
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