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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: Laura Carlie Darla Carems | Date: 2004-01-11 |
| Reviewid: 66596 | Chapter: 1 |
Hey!
I'm Laura Carlie Darla Carems!
Call me 'Carlie' and sometimes 'Darla'!
What should I say about this story? |
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| Reviewer: Beaker | Date: 2003-12-21 |
| Reviewid: 64246 | Chapter: 1 |
| P.S. I love your double-entendre title. I am a huge fan of the double-meaning title, especially when an author manages to create one that's just one word! |
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| Reviewer: Beaker | Date: 2003-12-21 |
| Reviewid: 64245 | Chapter: 1 |
Wow! This is really well done. The characterizations and dialogue are spot on. The interactions of the three friends, switching from teasing to serious and back again in a matter of moments, rings very true. I am also intrigued by your reasoning behind where they are and why they are camping out there. It really raises a good question--where IS safe for Harry?
And Harry's concern that both he and Voldemort must die in the end...yes, that's what I think, too, but my friends threaten to hit me when I try to say it! They want him to live to a ripe old age and have 12 kids. I would too, but... |
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| Reviewer: Julie | Date: 2003-09-06 |
| Reviewid: 51011 | Chapter: 1 |
Great Trio friendship moment! I don't know that Dumbledore would actually have them hiding out in the Forest, but it makes for an interesting story.
I especially liked the line "He wasn’t dying for ungrateful wizardkind. But he could for his best friends." That's something I firmly believe that Harry will realize and accept in the future.
Good job! |
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