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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Stewing
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: Reader2Date: 2005-03-23
Reviewid: 117436Chapter: 1
Good - well written, funny.
Bad - short. Please fix.

Reviewer: pirateloverDate: 2004-03-31
Reviewid: 76519Chapter: 1
cute!

Reviewer: Laura Carlie Darla CaremsDate: 2004-01-11
Reviewid: 66596Chapter: 1
Hey!
I'm Laura Carlie Darla Carems!
Call me 'Carlie' and sometimes 'Darla'!
What should I say about this story?

Reviewer: BeakerDate: 2003-12-21
Reviewid: 64246Chapter: 1
P.S. I love your double-entendre title. I am a huge fan of the double-meaning title, especially when an author manages to create one that's just one word!

Reviewer: BeakerDate: 2003-12-21
Reviewid: 64245Chapter: 1
Wow! This is really well done. The characterizations and dialogue are spot on. The interactions of the three friends, switching from teasing to serious and back again in a matter of moments, rings very true. I am also intrigued by your reasoning behind where they are and why they are camping out there. It really raises a good question--where IS safe for Harry?

And Harry's concern that both he and Voldemort must die in the end...yes, that's what I think, too, but my friends threaten to hit me when I try to say it! They want him to live to a ripe old age and have 12 kids. I would too, but...

Reviewer: JulieDate: 2003-09-06
Reviewid: 51011Chapter: 1
Great Trio friendship moment! I don't know that Dumbledore would actually have them hiding out in the Forest, but it makes for an interesting story.

I especially liked the line "He wasn’t dying for ungrateful wizardkind. But he could for his best friends." That's something I firmly believe that Harry will realize and accept in the future.

Good job!

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