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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Of Brooms and Trees
Review(s): 1

Reviewer: Zinnia EvansDate: 2003-08-31
Reviewid: 49809Chapter: 1
Wow, who beta'd this?

I'm firstly very impressed by your humor and characterizations of MWPP--very nice!
[...Remus, who grabbed Sirius. Heh].

But the overall effect of the story is somewhat diminished by all the typos! I mean, the first sentence is "James forward his brows." Que?

So please, do some editing, and then I'll be very amused indeed.

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