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Review(s): 5
| Reviewer: Curry | Date: 2003-09-14 |
| Reviewid: 52510 | Chapter: 1 |
| I love your little poem at the beginning, in disclaimer, you know? It's very cute. it looks like something I would do. |
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| Reviewer: Sarah | Date: 2003-09-09 |
| Reviewid: 51595 | Chapter: 1 |
| Yay Jenny! Your story was very beautiful and melodic- almost like a poem. The gift is there...you've unlocked it. Go forth and write some more! |
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| Reviewer: Julie | Date: 2003-09-04 |
| Reviewid: 50749 | Chapter: 1 |
Wow. There aren't many moments like this in a person's life, and I'm glad the Marauders had one. The repeated descriptions of Mooncalf as a "thing" should be funny, but it's not. It really works well.
One line especially gripped me: "it was the happiness that Peter would never feel again". Wow. |
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| Reviewer: Ann | Date: 2003-09-03 |
| Reviewid: 50537 | Chapter: 1 |
| What a beautifully written story! I so much enjoyed the imagery and the respectful and awestruck tone. The Marauders are some of my favorite characters and I truly loved reading about them more in depth. |
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| Reviewer: JiminyC | Date: 2003-08-31 |
| Reviewid: 49641 | Chapter: 1 |
| Jenny already knows that I love her story, but I wanted to post a public note to say that I think it's wonderful. Very sweet and touching!! Well done, kiddo! |
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