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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: A Forest Encounter
Review(s): 5

Reviewer: truefairy008Date: 2006-07-16
Reviewid: 144201Chapter: 1
ok

Reviewer: Grimy Grunhilda GruntDate: 2004-06-01
Reviewid: 85508Chapter: 1
*ROFL*

Reviewer: lil chrissyDate: 2004-01-04
Reviewid: 65867Chapter: 1
u could have written soo much more! theres a whole story, wat happens next, wat does ron say, how does he deal with it does he tell hermione and then releises he loves her! u could have written so much more so i really hope u do!

Reviewer: KateDate: 2003-09-11
Reviewid: 51785Chapter: 1
I really, really liked this story. I thought it was fairly realistic and could actually happen...I loved when Harry said "You're Ginny. And you're amazing."

That was so sweet! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: JessanndiDate: 2003-08-31
Reviewid: 49682Chapter: 1
Jesabelle - welcome to the Quill,

"You’re Ginny. And you’re amazing"

I think I had goose bumps at the end of this.

I really like the way you describe Ginny's actions, drawing her knees up or whipping out her wand, you really seem to have a firm idea of her in your mind.

I think that the first paragraph could have been broken up a bit more. It does run on a bit and is in some places repetative.

But what happens next? And you will tell us about the Bugbear incident won't you?

Keep on writing.

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