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Dumbledore's Army
Review(s): 2

Reviewer: hmmmm........Date: 2004-07-13
Reviewid: 92042Chapter: 1
hmmmmmmmm........ That kinda off. Not to be mean but why would the snail give up that easily? Why the heck did Ron all of the sudden say he adored hermione? If it was that easy to get rid of the giant snail than why didnt McGonagal do it? Why wasn't it seperated into different paragraphs?
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Reviewer: JulieDate: 2003-09-09
Reviewid: 51477Chapter: 1
It's okay, but if you want to write another story, try to break it up into more paragraphs.
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