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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Firenze's Choice
Review(s): 6

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2006-02-20
Reviewid: 140085Chapter: 1
Nicely Done

Reviewer: purebristlesDate: 2006-01-03
Reviewid: 137956Chapter: 1
This was lovely. You could write another piece on how the herd turned on him when he went to the edge of the forest, to justify how the hoof-mark landed on his chest which the kids saw in class...

Reviewer: Blue Eyes At NightDate: 2004-11-07
Reviewid: 103722Chapter: 1
I thought this was brilliant! There aren't enough Firenze stories out there! You should put this on fanfiction.net, if it is there i must've overlooked it and for that im sorry

Reviewer: Duskrider QDate: 2003-09-22
Reviewid: 53907Chapter: 1
You've got it all down pack! I think it could have stood for some action or drama where Firenze is arguing with the rest of his herd and maybe a fight in which he recieves the hoof mark and Hagrid come to the rescue. I think you're a gifted wirter.

One complaint though: You should have finished Riddled With Hatred. It's a story that isn't told often and isn't adressed really in the books. Please if you ever write another thing. FINISH that!

Reviewer: MullvaneyDate: 2003-09-04
Reviewid: 50788Chapter: 1
This is good! I get the feeling that you don't agree with the forced neutrality of the centaurs; you think it is almost arrogance. But forgive me if I'm wrong. You did a really great job conveying Firenze's internal strife, you really showed how difficult it was for him to go against his herd.

Reviewer: beDate: 2003-09-01
Reviewid: 49962Chapter: 1
Excellent, refreshing story! I really enjoyed it. :)

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