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Review(s): 6
| Reviewer: purebristles | Date: 2006-01-03 |
| Reviewid: 137956 | Chapter: 1 |
| This was lovely. You could write another piece on how the herd turned on him when he went to the edge of the forest, to justify how the hoof-mark landed on his chest which the kids saw in class... |
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| Reviewer: Blue Eyes At Night | Date: 2004-11-07 |
| Reviewid: 103722 | Chapter: 1 |
| I thought this was brilliant! There aren't enough Firenze stories out there! You should put this on fanfiction.net, if it is there i must've overlooked it and for that im sorry |
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| Reviewer: Duskrider Q | Date: 2003-09-22 |
| Reviewid: 53907 | Chapter: 1 |
You've got it all down pack! I think it could have stood for some action or drama where Firenze is arguing with the rest of his herd and maybe a fight in which he recieves the hoof mark and Hagrid come to the rescue. I think you're a gifted wirter.
One complaint though: You should have finished Riddled With Hatred. It's a story that isn't told often and isn't adressed really in the books. Please if you ever write another thing. FINISH that! |
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| Reviewer: Mullvaney | Date: 2003-09-04 |
| Reviewid: 50788 | Chapter: 1 |
| This is good! I get the feeling that you don't agree with the forced neutrality of the centaurs; you think it is almost arrogance. But forgive me if I'm wrong. You did a really great job conveying Firenze's internal strife, you really showed how difficult it was for him to go against his herd. |
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