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| Reviewer: Erin | Date: 2004-05-30 |
| Reviewid: 85223 | Chapter: 1 |
| Excellent! You have caught the essence of each of these characters and run with them beautifully. |
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| Reviewer: Rachel | Date: 2003-12-09 |
| Reviewid: 62624 | Chapter: 1 |
| Thanks for picking up on undoubtedly the second most disturbing line of Lupin's from PoA. It's about time someone wrote a story around it, and you did a really fine job! My vote for the most disturbing line would have to be, "Sirius thought it would be, er...amusing...to tell Snape where I went each month." But that's had a million stories around it. Thanks for picking up on the other moral ambiguity mentioned, and running with it. I especially liked Sirius' line: "We just proved we could handle you." He would say that, wouldn't he? And Remus would, guiltily, buy it. Great job. |
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| Reviewer: Emily | Date: 2003-10-22 |
| Reviewid: 57484 | Chapter: 1 |
| *grins* Lovely descriptions, totally in character. I always wondered...since Remus probably didn't hurt himself when the other Marauders transformed, wouldn't Madam Pomfrey notice something eventually? |
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| Reviewer: Katinka | Date: 2003-09-02 |
| Reviewid: 50192 | Chapter: 1 |
Oh, man...this piece brings up so many emotions! It starts out so visually -- you can just sense the animals' excitement as they explore the depths of the forest. And then my blood ran cold as the evening took a decidedly more brutal turn. And then afterwards...honestly, I wanted to kick those boys for being so stupid. I WISH they hadn't been that way!!! But you got their characters down -- especially Sirius' flippancy and Remus' unwillingness to cross his friends.
I hope more readers find this among all the entries -- it's really, really well done.
~Katinka |
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