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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: A Close Call
Review(s): 5

Reviewer: Reader2Date: 2005-03-02
Reviewid: 115280Chapter: 1
Very short but quite good

Reviewer: ErinDate: 2004-05-30
Reviewid: 85223Chapter: 1
Excellent! You have caught the essence of each of these characters and run with them beautifully.

Reviewer: RachelDate: 2003-12-09
Reviewid: 62624Chapter: 1
Thanks for picking up on undoubtedly the second most disturbing line of Lupin's from PoA. It's about time someone wrote a story around it, and you did a really fine job! My vote for the most disturbing line would have to be, "Sirius thought it would be, er...amusing...to tell Snape where I went each month." But that's had a million stories around it. Thanks for picking up on the other moral ambiguity mentioned, and running with it. I especially liked Sirius' line: "We just proved we could handle you." He would say that, wouldn't he? And Remus would, guiltily, buy it. Great job.

Reviewer: EmilyDate: 2003-10-22
Reviewid: 57484Chapter: 1
*grins* Lovely descriptions, totally in character. I always wondered...since Remus probably didn't hurt himself when the other Marauders transformed, wouldn't Madam Pomfrey notice something eventually?

Reviewer: KatinkaDate: 2003-09-02
Reviewid: 50192Chapter: 1
Oh, man...this piece brings up so many emotions! It starts out so visually -- you can just sense the animals' excitement as they explore the depths of the forest. And then my blood ran cold as the evening took a decidedly more brutal turn. And then afterwards...honestly, I wanted to kick those boys for being so stupid. I WISH they hadn't been that way!!! But you got their characters down -- especially Sirius' flippancy and Remus' unwillingness to cross his friends.

I hope more readers find this among all the entries -- it's really, really well done.

~Katinka

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