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Reviews for: First Light
Review(s): 7

Reviewer: reader2Date: 2005-03-03
Reviewid: 115336Chapter: 1
Interfering, brainless Centaurs?

Reviewer: MIaDate: 2004-07-29
Reviewid: 94449Chapter: 1
Please update soon. It is so good. There is this one website called schnoogle.com. It is all just plain Harry Potter stories. Try it! You know, I just love Marauder-era stories. By user name on schnoogle is MarauderLover101!
Update soon!

Cheers,
Lamya ( a.k.a. Mia) :)

Reviewer: Snowdevil44sDate: 2004-03-17
Reviewid: 74958Chapter: 1
Hello!

Muy bien! Much better than anything I could write. The centaurs were extremely interesting, it's just to bad they had to be so mean to poor little Remus.

The Marauders save the day! Gotta love the Marauders. Is this just a one shot, or is it going to be longer? Hopefully longer. Well till next time.

Reviewer: McGonagall's CatDate: 2004-03-01
Reviewid: 72750Chapter: 1
First Light is delightfully written and a very tight story. Please say this is just the first installment, that there is more to come.

Reviewer: BirgitDate: 2003-10-05
Reviewid: 55551Chapter: 1
Wonderful! The centaurs are very in character, judging by what we saw of them in OotP. Their conversation is really good.
The Marauders are also great. You're quite well exploring canon in this story, as things like this very well could've happened.
I would have liked more detail on Moony's transformation to Remus, but I guess that's because of the word limit.

Reviewer: CorgiDate: 2003-09-08
Reviewid: 51347Chapter: 1
Nice work, Lily! I didn't read the original, but this has very good pacing, nice and tight, in this form. Sirius keeping Remus and Moony separate in his mind is an interesting thought -- I like how you touched on that.

So -- what do you have planned next?

Reviewer: Zephyrus ProlixityDate: 2003-08-31
Reviewid: 49784Chapter: 1
Well done Lily. I really liked this.

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