Nicely done. It is amazing that Firenze was allowed to live after helping Harry the first time. I enjoyed seeing into his thought processes. I did catch a few typos, but not enough to distract me. Good job!
Reviewer: Talking Purple Rabbits
ooooh, what a powerful last line! Smacks of ominous-ness. ;)
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