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| Reviewer: Her-Me-Oh-Ninny | Date: 2004-07-04 |
| Reviewid: 90505 | Chapter: 1 |
| The wolfsbane potions lets Remus to retain his human mind when he transforms but it does not stop him turning into a wolf. Wonderful story,though |
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| Reviewer: Leslie | Date: 2003-10-30 |
| Reviewid: 58330 | Chapter: 1 |
Twenty-five years difference! Twenty-five!
You're a good writer, though, and you've used a lot of really good descriptive words in this piece. I'm opposed to the idea, not your writing. Good job. |
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| Reviewer: Darwin's Apprentice | Date: 2003-09-04 |
| Reviewid: 50681 | Chapter: 1 |
| Very sweet. The last Marauder does seem to need someone in his life doesn't he? The emotions you evoke are done well. I might have spent more time developing the Tonks/ Remus scene at the expense of Remus' night in the forest. But that night of roaming does make him seem sadder. Nice story. |
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| Reviewer: Talking Purple Rabbits | Date: 2003-09-01 |
| Reviewid: 49991 | Chapter: 1 |
oooh! what an idea!
Tonks/Remus? Who would have thought?
That is a great line: "Wolves mate for life, you know."
ta,
~TPR |
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