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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: Lilies for Lily
Review(s): 2

Reviewer: kayDate: 2003-10-18
Reviewid: 56950Chapter: 1
that was sweet... :)

Reviewer: JulieDate: 2003-09-04
Reviewid: 50728Chapter: 1
Great story! I always like to see Harry with good memories of his parents. Great job of tying in the Order and the Dursleys. It's too bad James and Lily were wrong about Dumbledore.

You have some great phrases in there. I especially liked "the silken menace of Snape’s voice". It just describes him perfectly. The fact that Snape would tell Harry about the lilies - is that in response to hearing that James would have trusted him with Harry? A great little insight into Snape's character.

One little jarring note at the end - I personally doubt that Harry will be calling Remus "Moony" during his sixth year. He seems quite stuck on "Professor Lupin". The question about Transfiguration, though, was perfect!

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