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Dumbledore's Army
Reviews for: A Purposeful Visit
Review(s): 4

Reviewer: Reader 2Date: 2005-07-11
Reviewid: 126775Chapter: 1
A brilliant start...
And then .....
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Reviewer: roadrnrDate: 2003-09-09
Reviewid: 51518Chapter: 1
Thanks for reading it! Yes, the word limit forced me to chop down the storyline. But maybe it's just as well. I re-read earlier drafts of this story and Rudy came across as preachy, even to the other characters.
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Reviewer: JulieDate: 2003-09-04
Reviewid: 50727Chapter: 1
This seems to end rather abruptly. (I know, the lenght constraints, right?) I'd like to see more of it. I like seeing Amos Diggory again, and Rudy seems to be an interesting character.
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Reviewer: CorgiDate: 2003-09-04
Reviewid: 50618Chapter: 1
You've managed to intrigue me with Rudy Brocklehurst. I think you should expand on what you have here, and develop this into a fuller story. You've found a nifty little mythos niche here. Take advantage of it.
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