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Reviews for: Luna's New Pet
Review(s): 8

Reviewer: TheWombatDate: 2005-08-23
Reviewid: 130664Chapter: 1
Sweet - very sweet!

Reviewer: katie BiliusDate: 2005-08-09
Reviewid: 129471Chapter: 1
WIKED!!!!!!BRILLIANT!!!!!!!

Reviewer: SpartinaDate: 2003-09-06
Reviewid: 50932Chapter: 1
"Bring me to the big, furry creature that lives in this forest....I didn't mean Hagrid!" <giggle>

The joke seems to be on Luna here--she's spotted the elusive Crumple-Horned Snorkack, and it's just one of Hagrid's experiments. Hmmm, does this mean the creatures have escaped from Hagrid and the Forest to populate Scandinavia (uh-oh...sounds like a classic cautionary tale of biological meddling to me!)? Or can we assume that Luna, having enjoyed a small joke at her own expense, is now going to parade the supposed Crumple-Horned Snorkack to her classmates and have her own joke at their expense? Either way, it's a very funny idea, full of possibilities--which I hope you'll one day explore.

Reviewer: JulieDate: 2003-09-04
Reviewid: 50721Chapter: 1
This story made me smile! I'm glad Luna got her Crumple-Horned Snorkack.

I still don't understand Luna much, but I think you've caught her personality well. Absent-mindedly singing "Weasley is our King" sounds like something she'd do. ROFL at the reference to Stubby Boardman.

Reviewer: Talking Purple RabbitsDate: 2003-09-01
Reviewid: 49993Chapter: 1
::laughs::

You write a good Luna!

‘Of course he’s upset,’ Luna reasoned with herself, ‘Anyone would be after watching a great singing sensation like Stubby Boardman die.’
LOL!

And her singing "Weasley Is Our King" completely fit with my image of her...

good work!
looking forward to more from you,
ta,
~TPR

Reviewer: beDate: 2003-09-01
Reviewid: 49959Chapter: 1
that was very cute. Great characterisation of Luna. :)

Reviewer: mdelaurDate: 2003-09-01
Reviewid: 49874Chapter: 1
cute twist! I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I liked that you incorporated the song... that was great.

Reviewer: solarphoenixDate: 2003-08-31
Reviewid: 49754Chapter: 1
Muahaha, I've found your story! Congrats on 'funniest explanation'.

Until the next,

solarphoenix.

P.S: Work on your new story pronto!

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