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Review(s): 3
| Reviewer: Julie | Date: 2003-09-04 |
| Reviewid: 50719 | Chapter: 1 |
You've managed to express the way I feel about Ginny and Harry. They're meant to be together someday, but he's not ready, and she needs to do other things instead of focusing on him.
"Those who run with The Boy Who Lived are always in danger" Not only is this true, it sounds like something a centaur would say. I think it's the phrase "run with". What I'm trying to say is that you've kept Firenze well in-character. Good job! |
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| Reviewer: E.P. | Date: 2003-09-01 |
| Reviewid: 49889 | Chapter: 1 |
| I just wanted to say this was really good! It's a perfect explanation of how Ginny "got over" Harry and it's written well enought that I forgot I wasn't in Professor's Bookshelf. Congrats. |
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| Reviewer: Robin | Date: 2003-08-31 |
| Reviewid: 49786 | Chapter: 1 |
“But what should I do until then?”
“Anything you like. It will not matter in the end.”
Nice! I like the notion of Ginny and Harry written in the stars, and I love your use of Firenze. He's wonderfully mystical and very well written. Good job! |
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