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Review(s): 3
| Reviewer: marinka13 | Date: 2005-04-06 |
| Reviewid: 118879 | Chapter: 1 |
| I really liked your story... The connection to the book is amazing. I just luved reading it, thought u shud know ;) |
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| Reviewer: Birgit | Date: 2003-09-07 |
| Reviewid: 51188 | Chapter: 1 |
Amazing, the way you tell this story from the point of view of a bird.
The story is sad, but very well written. I enjoyed reading it. |
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| Reviewer: Julie | Date: 2003-09-04 |
| Reviewid: 50715 | Chapter: 1 |
That's definitely a novel viewpoint! It's interesting that the Diricrawl feels for Harry. I like the way that, being invisible itself, it can see through Harry's Cloak.
You've got some good imagery here. I especially liked the last line - "I set off an explosion of feathers as I lift heavily into flight, invisible again, and I soar above the Forbidden Forest." Keep up the good work! |
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